nogen der vil rette min referat?

hej..
nogen der vil se efter grammatiske fejl eller noget der ikke passer sammen? (:



The story is about a little “black” family with a father called Sylvester, a mother and their
son Craig who is eleven years old; they live in a house in Mississippi. While The father
and the son Craig and twenty other people are on their way to Washington to vote, Craig
remembers how it whole Started for two years ago in 1963

It started with, that Sylvester wanted to go to Washington to register to vote. But his wife
said always that he should forget that voting and buy a gun so he could
project them. But Sylvester was fast decided that there are ways to win a
struggle without bombs and guns. Just as he was leaving, his boss came and warned him
that if he tried to register he will lose his job.
But it didn’t stop Sylvester from wanting to vote.
When he came back he wasn’t really happy, because he paid the poll tax, and at last they
would not register him, because he didn’t interpreted the state constitution like the way
they wanted.
A day he heard about the Mississippi Freedom Democratic Party.
On Election Day in 1964 Sylvester votes for three women to represent the
party. Many thousands other black people votes too. But the governor of Mississippi
declared that all of those thousands votes were illegal. He gave the certificates of election
to three white men to represent the black second congressional district.

But now Craig, the father Sylvester and twenty other friends are driving to Washington to
the House of Representatives to talk about their seats to the representatives elected by
the freedom party. They get to know that they are late to lobby, because the House of
Representatives will vote on that issue this morning.

When they goes under a tunnel to get out of the rain, they meet two Congressmen Ryan
and Hawkins that are working for getting votes on the fairly side. They invite them all in
to the House of Representatives.
While they are seating in the gallery, a congressman called Gerald ford is speaking
about fairly elected members of the freedom party, he don’t want any of the fairly elected
members in the house. He says that all shall stick on the rule of letting only people with
credentials from their states be seated in congress, but that rule will denies the black
peoples right to vote.
The time comes for congress to vote if they want to have any members from the freedom
party.
When the voting is over and they have count the votes, there is 148 votes
for yes. the two congressmen Ryan and Hawkins is surprised, they have think that they
just will get 50 votes. But Sylvester, Craig and the other twenty peoples silently have
made a difference in the vote.