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Strange things in the laboratory

I’ll never forget it. It was the 22 of August 2010. We were sitting in the classroom on Friday afternoon. We were having a Danish lesson. I remember it clearly. Miss Elizabeth was telling us about verbs. Suddenly two teachers run into the class room. They looked very scared.
“We are all going to die, we have to run away before they come and eat us!” they shouted. “What are you talking about Mr. James and John? What are coming to eat us?” Some of us asked. Miss Elizabeth was very quiet; it seemed that she knew what they were talking about. She took the two teachers and went out of the class room. “How dare u talking about it in front of the pupils!”
“What? We came to warn you. You can’t stay here, you know how dangerous it is!” the two teachers answered irritably.
“I know, but it’s our problem, we have made it! Does any other know about it?”
“No maim, but what should we do” Mr. James answered softly.
Elizabeth looked annoyed and yelled “don’t do anything about it! Forget it! And don’t tell any about it. GO NOW BACK TO YOUR CLASSROOMS!”
When Miss Elizabeth went in the classroom, we all wanted to know what was going on.
But the only answer we got was “oh there was nothing. U know James and John, they just wanted to scare us!”

I personally didn’t believe her, because i knew that something strange was going on here in the school.
Every day, when i went past the schools big laboratory i heard strange sounds in there, it didn’t sound like it was humans, but more like animal or maybe other creatures.
I was so curious to know about what was going on in the laboratory, so i took my best friend Ellen and went to the part of the school where the nerds studied. I tried to open the door to the laboratory, but it was closed and then i noticed that there was a big paper sat on the door that had the letters “do not enter. The room is poisoned”.
Then i got a new idea, i thought if that was right, then they had opened the windows of the laboratory and we could get in, in this way.
But I still remember that Ellen told me that it wasn’t a good idea, and I should have listen to her

Then we went out in the school yard and looked after the laboratory’s window, finally i found the window, it was behind some bushes.
It was also closed. I tried to look in to the laboratory, but could hardly see anything.
“I’m going to smash the window glass” I informed Ellen, so she could know what my idea was.
Ellen was still bulling me. “Stop it! U is afraid, right? Then go! I don’t want you here! ” I yelled
And suddenly I regretted. Ellen got tears in her eyes “no I’m not afraid, it’s just because I’m worried about something will happen to u! It’s just because i care about u! And what does u do? U just yells at me! But I would not let u go in alone, I’m going with u! ”
I felt shame. “Hmm, fine I’m sorry about yelling at u.” I said quiet.

I found a big stone and smashed the glass.
Suddenly I got at rotten smell in my nose, that i was going to faint. And fortunately Ellen pushed me hurry away from the window.
“I told u! Just think if the laboratory really was poisoned? U could have died!” Ellen sound angry.
I looked in to her eyes and I was thinking about something strange. “Ellen no it could not be this, because I saw something moving in the room and it smelled of dung and plants.”
I observed Ellen; she was moving over to the window and climbed down.
I was just seating in the ground trying to get out of the smell and then I suddenly heard Ellen screaming.
“0h help me please! Something is trying to eat me!” she screamed
I looked into the room and saw some kind of green string that was twisted around Ellen’s legs.
When I climbed down in the room I looked after Ellen, but she was disappeared. I called after her, but there was nothing.
Suddenly something took around my left arm, I was chocked and tried just to run away.
It succeeds finally to run away, I climbed up from the window and run after some help.
I found my teacher miss. Elizabeth and told her what happened. She looked strange at me and said that I should go with her.
She took me to the laboratory and opened the door.
Then she pushed me hard, so I fall on the ground, she closed the door and went her way.
I began to cry, I was really scared, I was locked in here in this terrible dark laboratory with some strange creatures and with my best friend Ellen some place there.
Suddenly Elizabeth came from the other side beside the smashed window and locked it with some big stones.
I gave up, now there wasn’t any hope from getting out from here…