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Ved ikke hvilket niveau du er på, om det er folkeskolen eller gymnasiet. Men noget der løfter engelsk stile meget i niveau, er når man undgår personlige stedord som I, me, you etc. Derfor er mit råd til dig, at begynde at skrive uden brug af de personlige stedord.

How right is it to make an artificial insemination? Get an embryo reduction?

these days we have some discussions about how right or how ethical right it's to make things like that.

I mean it's okay to make some of these things.?(The reason is the most important and we most get
some laws for artificial insemination and embryo reduction)?.
?(Earlier there was not any legislation for embryo reduction and the doctors understood it like an abortion)?.
We have an individual law for embryo reduction but it's not exact.

“The ethic advice” recommends that we most get laws in this area and I defiantly agree.
The law says that you can get a embryo reduction if you have a medical reason.
I think it's okay but if the women or the partners do not have a good economic situation then it's okay to get an embryo reduction I think because the child must grow up under fair conditions.
Many people think that it's very incomprehensible how people ever can do thinks like embryo reduction artificial insemination.
They think it is very unnatural.
I don't think they have the right to have an opinion like that.
It's not because we don't do things that are unnatural. e.g., we are flying in planes, driving cars etc. and these things are unnatural too. I don't understand why people have an opinion like that.

(har du tænkt på at dem der har disse meninger mener at der bliver overskredet nogen grænser?? måske mener de at det er op til gud at bestemme sådan noget??)

We live in a world where big developments are happening and I am sure that in the feature we will get other inventions where an opposition will be permit.
The development can perhaps be a little extreme. On a way where you can make a martificial insemination. You can choose yourself which sex the child should have.
If it was possible for every body then we know the biggest choosing group will choose male because he can work and earn money for the family etc.

(det er ikke sikkert, hvis kvinden bestemmer så kunne det lige så godt være at det var at de ville vælge at få en pige frem for en dreng, da man i dag også kan arbejde som kvinde og nå langt i livet)

What if we compare these things with Islam?

In Islam, it's forbidden to get an artificial insemination because you say it is Allah who has to decide how the child should be.
It's a big sin.
?(However, unfortunately in the feature the science will have a bad influence for Islam if things should have done like today.)?
The artificial insemination is a benefit for families who have genetic problems.
I mean that there must be a law for using of artificial insemination.
It must be possible for families who have genetic problems only and not for fun.

der er meget der skal rettes hvis du gerne vil have en god karakter, når du skriver i mean er ikke så godt du skal enten skrive i think eller lade helt vær med at skrive det... og så skriver du også alt for hverdags agtigt, det trækker rigtig meget ned... når der er ord der kan trækkes sammen så gør det...