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Hjælp til rettelse af Angelas Aske analyse
20. marts 2007 af
niobe (Slettet)
Hej! er der en som vil hjælpe mig med at rette følgende; ved godt, at der en del fejl - men det er tilgengæld ikke så langt.
på forhånd mange tak!
Angela’s ashes is about the author Frank McCourts own life. The novel is a tribute to his mother, Angela. The book where filmed in 19??, and the film gathered good reviews.
Angela is in the book described as a fantastic strong woman, who in spite of the unfair life, manage to make a living for the family. The father is compared to Angela week and unbalanced; were Angela fight against the sorrow of her death children, the husband just gives up, and start to drink even more. The novel is told by little Frankie and takes start when Frank is about 4 years old, the situations in the book is seen trough the eyes of a little child, and told very truthful. This result in, that the sad events in the book become a bit humorous.
The poorness isn’t just applying for Angela’s family, Ireland is generally very poor – the country is in a depression. Ireland is very important for the father, and makes his sons swear, that they will die for Ireland, and makes them sing freedom songs for Ireland.
på forhånd mange tak!
Angela’s ashes is about the author Frank McCourts own life. The novel is a tribute to his mother, Angela. The book where filmed in 19??, and the film gathered good reviews.
Angela is in the book described as a fantastic strong woman, who in spite of the unfair life, manage to make a living for the family. The father is compared to Angela week and unbalanced; were Angela fight against the sorrow of her death children, the husband just gives up, and start to drink even more. The novel is told by little Frankie and takes start when Frank is about 4 years old, the situations in the book is seen trough the eyes of a little child, and told very truthful. This result in, that the sad events in the book become a bit humorous.
The poorness isn’t just applying for Angela’s family, Ireland is generally very poor – the country is in a depression. Ireland is very important for the father, and makes his sons swear, that they will die for Ireland, and makes them sing freedom songs for Ireland.
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20. marts 2007 af Katrine (Slettet)
"Angela's Ashes" is abouth the author Frank McCourt's own life. - Husk titler med stort og genitivs aprostof+s.
The book WAS made into a film in 19?? - Bog er ental. Where betyder desuden 'hvor'.
fantastic, strong woman..
..in spite of HER unfair life, manageS to make a living for HER family - Husk at ental tager s på verber.
The father is in comparison to Angela weak and unbalanced; where Angela fightS - husk igen entals-s. week betyder uge. Were er flertalsformen af was.
death betyder døden, dead betyder død, at være død.
Dvs. ..the sorrow of her dead children.
The husband just gives up and starts drinking even more. IGEN entals-s. Meget vigtigt!
..little Frankie and startS when Frank(ie) is...
Opdel sætningen, så du starter med stort bogstav ved "The situations".
Bemærk, at situationer er flertal. Så skal der IKKE entals-s på. Så 'The situations in the book ARE seen)
Du må ikke sætte komma foran 'that'. Undlad ordet i stedet for.
This resultS in the sad events becomming a bit humourous.
Undgå sammentrækninger, skriv i stedet ordene fuldt ud.
..important TO the father, so HE makes his sons swear that they will die for their country (i stedet for at sige Ireland tre gange i træk), and he makes them..
The book WAS made into a film in 19?? - Bog er ental. Where betyder desuden 'hvor'.
fantastic, strong woman..
..in spite of HER unfair life, manageS to make a living for HER family - Husk at ental tager s på verber.
The father is in comparison to Angela weak and unbalanced; where Angela fightS - husk igen entals-s. week betyder uge. Were er flertalsformen af was.
death betyder døden, dead betyder død, at være død.
Dvs. ..the sorrow of her dead children.
The husband just gives up and starts drinking even more. IGEN entals-s. Meget vigtigt!
..little Frankie and startS when Frank(ie) is...
Opdel sætningen, så du starter med stort bogstav ved "The situations".
Bemærk, at situationer er flertal. Så skal der IKKE entals-s på. Så 'The situations in the book ARE seen)
Du må ikke sætte komma foran 'that'. Undlad ordet i stedet for.
This resultS in the sad events becomming a bit humourous.
Undgå sammentrækninger, skriv i stedet ordene fuldt ud.
..important TO the father, so HE makes his sons swear that they will die for their country (i stedet for at sige Ireland tre gange i træk), and he makes them..
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