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rettelse af oversættelse.
21. marts 2007 af
Freddy! (Slettet)
Ed Jackson from Texas has been sentence lifelong prison for armed robbery. He got arrested, after he had been indentified from the picture from his driver license. Ed Jackson is 26 years old. He is educated engineer and has always handle him self, since he left High School. 2 years ago he married one of his old schoolfriend, and is now the father to a girl on 1 year. We have allowed speaking with him in the prison. He turns out to be a quiet black man, who is coming calmly into the room and sits down to talk with us. He tells how it was told in the court, that he had a criminal pass, which is completely not true. He means that it is from a report of him, as a 68 years old woman had send in. She had found it suspicious that he often sad in a park reading a book from him self, in the same park she walked in every day. She felt, she had to go to the police with her suspect when there was a robbery in the restaurant in the area. He was jugged, even there was been given testify of he was at work when the robbery was. Ed Jackson leans back in his chair and sits silence for a moment, before he continues telling that his lawyer left him when it showed up that all his money was used. Ed Jackson supplies that he feels thankful that NAACP has assign a lawyer to work on his case on his appeal case. He thinks that justice in the end will win.
hvis folk har nogle rettelser til det må de gerne skrive det:)
hvis folk har nogle rettelser til det må de gerne skrive det:)
Svar #1
10. april 2007 af Chr26 (Slettet)
Da du ikke oplyser den danske tekst, har jeg mest kigget på grammatikken, komma, stavefejl. De steder, hvor meningen måske blevet lidt ændret, må du selv finde ud af at rette det, så det passer med den danske tekst.
Ed Jackson from Texas has been SENTENCED TO lifelong IMPRISONMENT for armed robbery. He WAS arrested, after he had been IDENTIFIED from the picture ON his DRIVING license. Ed Jackson is TWENTY-SIX years old. He WAS educated AS AN engineer and has always BEEN ABLE TO TAKE CARE OF HIMSELF, since he left high school. TWO years ago he married one of his old SCHOOL FRIENDS, and is now the father to ONE-YEAR-OLD GIRL. We ARE allowed TO SPEAK TO him in the prison. He turns out to be a quiet black man, who CALMLY COMES into the room and sits down to talk with us. He tells how it was told in the court that he had a criminal PAST, which is completely UNTRUE. He BELIEVES that A SIXTY-EIGHT YEAR old woman SENT IN A REPORT. She had found it suspicious that he often SAT in a park reading a book BY HIMSELF, in the same park THAT she walked in every day. She felt THAT she had to go to the police ABOUT her SUSPICIONS, when there was a robbery in the restaurant in the area. He was JAILED, even THOUGH HE TESTIFIED THAT he was at work when the robbery TOOK PLACE. Ed Jackson leans back in his chair and sits SILENTLY for a moment, before he continues EXPLAINING that his lawyer left him, when it TURNED OUT that all his money HAD BEEN used UP. Ed Jackson ADDS that he feels thankful that NAACP has ASSIGNED a lawyer to work on his appeal case. He thinks that justice will win in the end.
-Jeg har lært, at det er mest rigtigt at skrive tal(fx 68) som ord SIXTY-EIGHT.
-high school staves med små bogstaver.
-Aldrig komma foran THAT ! (linje 9).
-Du skriver jugged(linje 14), gætter på, du mener jailed?
-Supplies (linje 17) er det forkerte ord at bruge i den sammenhæng, måske ADDS?
Håber mine rettelser er en hjælp! (:
Ed Jackson from Texas has been SENTENCED TO lifelong IMPRISONMENT for armed robbery. He WAS arrested, after he had been IDENTIFIED from the picture ON his DRIVING license. Ed Jackson is TWENTY-SIX years old. He WAS educated AS AN engineer and has always BEEN ABLE TO TAKE CARE OF HIMSELF, since he left high school. TWO years ago he married one of his old SCHOOL FRIENDS, and is now the father to ONE-YEAR-OLD GIRL. We ARE allowed TO SPEAK TO him in the prison. He turns out to be a quiet black man, who CALMLY COMES into the room and sits down to talk with us. He tells how it was told in the court that he had a criminal PAST, which is completely UNTRUE. He BELIEVES that A SIXTY-EIGHT YEAR old woman SENT IN A REPORT. She had found it suspicious that he often SAT in a park reading a book BY HIMSELF, in the same park THAT she walked in every day. She felt THAT she had to go to the police ABOUT her SUSPICIONS, when there was a robbery in the restaurant in the area. He was JAILED, even THOUGH HE TESTIFIED THAT he was at work when the robbery TOOK PLACE. Ed Jackson leans back in his chair and sits SILENTLY for a moment, before he continues EXPLAINING that his lawyer left him, when it TURNED OUT that all his money HAD BEEN used UP. Ed Jackson ADDS that he feels thankful that NAACP has ASSIGNED a lawyer to work on his appeal case. He thinks that justice will win in the end.
-Jeg har lært, at det er mest rigtigt at skrive tal(fx 68) som ord SIXTY-EIGHT.
-high school staves med små bogstaver.
-Aldrig komma foran THAT ! (linje 9).
-Du skriver jugged(linje 14), gætter på, du mener jailed?
-Supplies (linje 17) er det forkerte ord at bruge i den sammenhæng, måske ADDS?
Håber mine rettelser er en hjælp! (:
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