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skal aflevere om 2 timer ... :(
09. april 2007 af
michell-88 (Slettet)
er der ikk en der er sød lige at kigge dette igennem. det er en lille tekst, som skal rettes for stave- gramma- og kommafejl. det ville virkelig være lækkert... takker :D
Robots are a very good thing to have, because it is a big help in the industry. It is faster than real humans and much cheaper to have and there is no complaining about the hard work or low salary. Not only in the industry is it used, but also in the small things we do not even think about. The luxurious thinks like a robot which can mow the lawn it self without you have to check on it. I think that we will always look at robots like they are our slaves and I do not think that we will see them like one of our own. I am afraid that we would treat them as badly as the immigrants in our country. I mean if we cannot be nice to the immigrants, then how can we be nice to robots, which is not even a real human being.
Robots are a very good thing to have, because it is a big help in the industry. It is faster than real humans and much cheaper to have and there is no complaining about the hard work or low salary. Not only in the industry is it used, but also in the small things we do not even think about. The luxurious thinks like a robot which can mow the lawn it self without you have to check on it. I think that we will always look at robots like they are our slaves and I do not think that we will see them like one of our own. I am afraid that we would treat them as badly as the immigrants in our country. I mean if we cannot be nice to the immigrants, then how can we be nice to robots, which is not even a real human being.
Svar #3
09. april 2007 af Esbenps
"Robots are a very good thing to have, because it is a big help in the industry. It is faster than real humans and much cheaper to have and there is no complaining about the hard work or low salary..." - Du starter med at bruge 'robots' i flertal. Så skifter du pludselig til 'it'. Burde du ikke skrive 'they are faster than...' og '...because they are a big help...'?
"The luxurious thinks like a robot which can mow the lawn it self without you have to check on it." - Tænker de luksuriøse som robotter? Det hedder i øvrigt 'itself' i ét ord...
"The luxurious thinks like a robot which can mow the lawn it self without you have to check on it." - Tænker de luksuriøse som robotter? Det hedder i øvrigt 'itself' i ét ord...
Svar #4
09. april 2007 af Chr26 (Slettet)
Robots are a very good thing to have, AS THEY ARE a big help within industry. THEY ARE faster than (real) humans and much cheaper and there ARE no COMPLAINTS about hard work or low salary. Not only in industry ARE THEY used, but also in the small things we do not even think about. (OMFORMULERE: The luxurious thinks like a robot which can mow the lawn it self without you have to check on it.) I think that we will always look at robots AS IF they are our slaves and I do not think that we will see them like one of our own. I am afraid that we would treat them as badly as the immigrants in our country. I BELIEVE THAT if we cannot be nice to immigrants, then how can we be nice to robots, which are not even (real) human BEINGS.
-Du har en del steder hvor du bør skrive THEY ARE, fordi ”robots” er flertal.
-Overvej seriøst at slette ”real” når du nævner humans. ”Real” virker overflødigt.
-Du har nogle overflødige ”the” hist og her: Fx ”the hard work”, hvor det er nok at skrive ”hard work”.
-Sætningen der starter med ”The luxurious” giver ikke mening, når jeg læser det, prøv at omformulere det, fx: ”A hi-tech intelligent robot can mow the lawn by itself without having to check on it”.
Held og lykke med det!
Christopher
-Du har en del steder hvor du bør skrive THEY ARE, fordi ”robots” er flertal.
-Overvej seriøst at slette ”real” når du nævner humans. ”Real” virker overflødigt.
-Du har nogle overflødige ”the” hist og her: Fx ”the hard work”, hvor det er nok at skrive ”hard work”.
-Sætningen der starter med ”The luxurious” giver ikke mening, når jeg læser det, prøv at omformulere det, fx: ”A hi-tech intelligent robot can mow the lawn by itself without having to check on it”.
Held og lykke med det!
Christopher
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