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lidt tekst rettes til tak :)
09. april 2007 af
michell-88 (Slettet)
hej... gider i lige kigge den her igennem for forskellige fejl. tak :)
I keep thinking about what some of the children said about the robot. They felt sorry for it because there was not anybody who talked to it. Here comes the question. Do robots have feelings? If so, should we really feel sorry for them? I do not think that the scientists can make robots feel love and hate like us, so we should not feel sorry for them. I mean, if the have no feelings then they cannot feel that we are just using them to do all the bad work that we do not want to do. Like mowing the lawn, cleaning the house and nursing the children when we have to work. In America they already have robot-butlers, to do these things in the house. Would that be the next thing that we will get here in Denmark? If so, I really hope that I am right about they do not have any feelings, cause then I should feel bad for them and have a bad conscience.
I keep thinking about what some of the children said about the robot. They felt sorry for it because there was not anybody who talked to it. Here comes the question. Do robots have feelings? If so, should we really feel sorry for them? I do not think that the scientists can make robots feel love and hate like us, so we should not feel sorry for them. I mean, if the have no feelings then they cannot feel that we are just using them to do all the bad work that we do not want to do. Like mowing the lawn, cleaning the house and nursing the children when we have to work. In America they already have robot-butlers, to do these things in the house. Would that be the next thing that we will get here in Denmark? If so, I really hope that I am right about they do not have any feelings, cause then I should feel bad for them and have a bad conscience.
Svar #1
09. april 2007 af Esbenps
"Like mowing the lawn, cleaning the house and nursing the children when we have to work." - Denne sætning bør ikke stå alene. Fjern punktummet før den og så start med lille bogstav...
"In America they already have robot-butlers, to do these things in the house." - Der skal ikke være komma der...
"If so, I really hope that I am right about they do not have any feelings..." - Forkert fortsættelse af 'about'. Du bør omformulere til '...that I am right about them not having any feelings...' eller '...that I am right about the fact that they do not have any feelings...'
Umiddelbart så jeg ikke mere :-)
"In America they already have robot-butlers, to do these things in the house." - Der skal ikke være komma der...
"If so, I really hope that I am right about they do not have any feelings..." - Forkert fortsættelse af 'about'. Du bør omformulere til '...that I am right about them not having any feelings...' eller '...that I am right about the fact that they do not have any feelings...'
Umiddelbart så jeg ikke mere :-)
Svar #2
09. april 2007 af Teazy (Slettet)
I keep thinking about what some of the children said about the robot. They felt sorry for it because there WERE not anybody who talked to it. Here comes the question. Do robots have feelings? If so, should we really feel sorry for them? I do not think that the scientists can make robots feel love and HATRED like us, so we should not feel sorry for them. I mean, if THEY have no feelings then they cannot feel that we are just using them to do all the bad work(KAN OMFULERES) that we do not want to do. Like mowing the lawn, cleaning the house and nursing the children when we have to work. In America they already have robot-butlers, to do these things in the house. Would that be the next thing that we will get here in Denmark? If so, I really hope that I am right about they do not have any feelings, cause then I should feel bad for them and have a bad conscience.
(sætningerne bliver til tider lidt kluntede, så der er brug for nogle omformuleringer)
Selve gramatikken ser fin ud, synes jeg. Jeg kan dog have overset noget.
(sætningerne bliver til tider lidt kluntede, så der er brug for nogle omformuleringer)
Selve gramatikken ser fin ud, synes jeg. Jeg kan dog have overset noget.
Svar #3
09. april 2007 af Chr26 (Slettet)
"if the have no feelings"
Enten kan du skrive : if THEY have no feelings.
Eller : if the ROBOTS have no feelings.
God påske !
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