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18. april 2007 af
joo34 (Slettet)
Nogen hjælpe mig med at rette min reesume. Jeg er ikke god til engelsk, men prøv allegevil at skrive en kort resumen.
TAk
the story is about two friends. one of them is Elly and the other is Sophie. The two girls are young, and they are very close together.
It is Sunday morning with Chistmas four days away Sophie come to Elly´s house to met her. Sophie and Elly speak about many different things, and hear to music. Elly have very problem with eating and she is very thin and would not to show her body to her friend Sophie.
Elly is very upset and is crying. Elly ask Sophie about when is okay to die, because she is maybe tried of her life. But Sophie gave her advices, that she shall talk to someone about her problem, because she is very ill Sophie says it is never okay to die before you have ever been loved and do the things you like.T
TAk
the story is about two friends. one of them is Elly and the other is Sophie. The two girls are young, and they are very close together.
It is Sunday morning with Chistmas four days away Sophie come to Elly´s house to met her. Sophie and Elly speak about many different things, and hear to music. Elly have very problem with eating and she is very thin and would not to show her body to her friend Sophie.
Elly is very upset and is crying. Elly ask Sophie about when is okay to die, because she is maybe tried of her life. But Sophie gave her advices, that she shall talk to someone about her problem, because she is very ill Sophie says it is never okay to die before you have ever been loved and do the things you like.T
Svar #1
18. april 2007 af thosa (Slettet)
Min version ville se ud sledes:
The story revolves around(lidt finere end "is about") two young and very close friends, Elly and Sophie.
On a Sunday morning with Chistmas four days away, Sophie goes to Ellys house to visit her. They talk about many different subjects, and listen to music. Elly has an eating disorder and is very thin, and avoids showing her body to Sophie. Elly becomes upset and cries. Elly asks Sophie whether it's okay to die, because she might be tired of life. But Sophie gives her a piece of advice: that she should talk to someone about her problem, because she's is very ill. Sophie says it is never okay to die before you have ever been loved and do the things you like.
The story revolves around(lidt finere end "is about") two young and very close friends, Elly and Sophie.
On a Sunday morning with Chistmas four days away, Sophie goes to Ellys house to visit her. They talk about many different subjects, and listen to music. Elly has an eating disorder and is very thin, and avoids showing her body to Sophie. Elly becomes upset and cries. Elly asks Sophie whether it's okay to die, because she might be tired of life. But Sophie gives her a piece of advice: that she should talk to someone about her problem, because she's is very ill. Sophie says it is never okay to die before you have ever been loved and do the things you like.
Svar #2
18. april 2007 af Zipzap112 (Slettet)
Christmas* or X-mas =)
Sophies comes/goes/walks to Elly's house to meet! her.
listen to music.
Elly has (eller suffers from an eating disorder)...
...and she won't show her body...
Elly is very upset and cries.
Elly asks Sophie when it is okay to die, because she is (maybe??) tired of her life. (gæt)
But Sophie tells (hold fast i tiden) her that (aldrig komma foran "that") she should talk to someone about her problem, becasue she is very ill.
Det var i hvert fald nogle stykker.
Sophies comes/goes/walks to Elly's house to meet! her.
listen to music.
Elly has (eller suffers from an eating disorder)...
...and she won't show her body...
Elly is very upset and cries.
Elly asks Sophie when it is okay to die, because she is (maybe??) tired of her life. (gæt)
But Sophie tells (hold fast i tiden) her that (aldrig komma foran "that") she should talk to someone about her problem, becasue she is very ill.
Det var i hvert fald nogle stykker.
Svar #3
18. april 2007 af Gruk (Slettet)
The story is about two friends. One of them is Elly and the other is Sophie. The two girls are young, and they are very close eachother.
It is Sunday morning with Chistmas four days away Sophie comes to Elly´s house to meet her. Sophie and Elly speak about many different things and listen to music. Elly have many problems with eating and she is very thin and would not to show her body to her friend Sophie.
Elly is very upset cries. Elly asks Sophie about it is okay to die, because she might be tired of her life. But Sophie gives her the advice that she shall talk to someone about her problem, because she is very ill. Sophie says it is never (ved ikke om jeg helt forstår den sidste sætning)
Gruk
It is Sunday morning with Chistmas four days away Sophie comes to Elly´s house to meet her. Sophie and Elly speak about many different things and listen to music. Elly have many problems with eating and she is very thin and would not to show her body to her friend Sophie.
Elly is very upset cries. Elly asks Sophie about it is okay to die, because she might be tired of her life. But Sophie gives her the advice that she shall talk to someone about her problem, because she is very ill. Sophie says it is never (ved ikke om jeg helt forstår den sidste sætning)
Gruk
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