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1) My last words
By Andy Williams


By the time u will read this I might be dead or even worse, in jail..

The following lines you will read, will provide you with the questions that right now is driving you
crazy.” Why did he do it”, I can imagine your foolish faces, deeply confused about what the little
“pussy” is aware to do. Just mention it, in case you had forgot my real name..

I was difficult enough from the start. I did grow up nearly without at mothers hand near me, and
therefore was forced to live in a little place with my dad alone, witch couldn’t let go off his
during the week. At the weekend, the TV and the beer became his best friends, I think you got the
point, don’t you?
At the school I didn’t fell well either. I got picked on and bullied by almost everyone I got in range
of my “friends” . I began to fell the hate grow inside me, the hate that woke up inside felt like a
burst in my heart that after got released. I had no feelings… I have no feelings. To get away from
my life I started to dodge the school, instead hang out with some skate dudes. They had a lot of
crack and joints, that they generously shared with me. I must say, it felt good to get away from
world, get new visions, and watch the world from a total different point of view. But not even my
gang I couldn’t avoid the bulling, maybe it was a part of being in the culture they had.. I don’t know
to be honest. Anyway I began the get enough of this shit, someone had to fell my anger…
permanently. The do of my glory and freedom did come much faster that I expected. That day I
woke up with the felling of, I was ready to do it. Without my dad noticed I took his .22 cal long
barrel revolver and took it with me to the school.
Enough of false judgments suffer and pain. We will se who will be the “pussy” this time, when I
blow your head of, witch will leave a deep red color of victory on the walls of the school!
My don’t give a shit for anyone anymore, death does not scary me… neither do you


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