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14. maj 2007 af Hans4444 (Slettet)
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Dansk:
Nyt håb for selvstyret i Nordirland

Nordirland. Forhandlingerne om at genoplive det nordiske selvstyre er endt med et aftaleudkast.
Aftalen skal godkendes af partierne i Nordirland inden 10. november. Bliver den ikke det, truer briterne med at opløse parlamentet og endeligt styre Nordirland fra London. Bliver paterne derimod enige, skal en ny lokal regering styre Nordirland fra 26. marts 2007.
Den britiske premierminister, Tony Blair, og hans irske kollega, Bertie Ahern, nåede til enighed efter tre dages forhandlinger i St. Andrews i Skotland, hvor Blair og Ahern har været værter for tre dages drøftelser mellem ledere fra begge sider af den delte provins, Ulster. Republikanerne ønsker, at Ulster skal være en del af Irland, mens unionisterne fortsat ønsker en union med Storbritannien.
Ifølge Tony Blair er de vigtigste punkter i aftalen, at partierne når en klar aftale om magtdeling, og at de accepterer den opdeling i retsinstanser, som er fremlagt i forslaget.
”Vi har været igennem forskellige dele af processen utallige gange de seneste år, men jeg tror, der nu er lagt et sundt grundlag til at komme videre”, siger Tony Blair ifølge AP.

Engelsk:

New hope for home rule in Northern Ireland

Northern Ireland. The negotiations regarding the revival of the northern Irish home rule are ended up with an agreement draft.
The agreement has to approval of the parties in Northern Ireland before 10th november. Did it not stay, threaten the British that dissolve the parliament and final (last) rule Northern Ireland from 26th March 2007.
The British Prime Minister, Tony Blair, and his Irish colleague, Bertie Ahern, came to agreement after three days negotiations in St. Andrews in Scotland, where Blair and Ahern have been hostess for three days discussions between the leaders from both sides of the divided province, Ulster. The Republican wishes that Ulster have to be a part of Ireland, whereas the unions’ continuing wishes one union with Great Britain.
According to Tony Blair are the most important points in the agreement that the parties come to a clear about the division of power and that they accept the division in court, who are displayed in the proposal.
“We have been through different parts of the process time and time again at the latest years, but I belief, there now is put a healthy basis to move on”, says Tony Blair according to AP.

På forhånd tak.

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15. maj 2007 af T83 (Slettet)

New hope for home rule in Northern Ireland

Northern Ireland. The negotiations regarding the revival of the Northern Irish home rule have ended up with an agreement.
The agreement has to be approved by the Northern Irish parties before 10th november. In case of their disapproval, the British threaten to dissolve the parliament and to rule Northern Ireland at last from 26th March 2007 on.
The British Prime Minister, Tony Blair, and his Irish colleague, Bertie Ahern, came to an agreement after three days negotiations in St. Andrews in Scotland, where Blair and Ahern have been hosted for three days lasting discussions between the leaders of both sides of the divided province of Ulster. The Republicans want Ulster to become a part of Ireland, whereas the Unionists still want Ulster to be in union with Great Britain.
According to Tony Blair the most important points in the agreement are that the parties find a clear compromise about the division of power and that they accept this division in court, as it is displayed in the proposal.
“We have been through different parts of the process ever and ever again within the last years, but I do believe, there is now put a healthy basis to go on”, Tony Blair states according to AP.

Jeg er ikke en ekspert i engelsk, men det her er min forslag.
Jeg håber, det hjælper lidt.


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Svar #2
15. maj 2007 af T83 (Slettet)

Jeg kommer lige i tanker om, om der ikke skal stå:

We have been through different parts of the process ever and ever again THROUGH the last years...

Jeg tror, "through" lyder bedst.

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