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Rettelse af tekst
15. maj 2007 af
pisi (Slettet)
Hey, er der nogle, der vil være søde lige at kigge denne opgave igennem for (små)fejl, ville være rigtig lækkert :)
Dear Sirs
In the clothing industry we experience in these years a very keen competition, and to survive is it important that our firm to constantly be in the limelight. This is the reason that we apply to you.
We are set about to examine the opportunities to extend our activities and think about among other things to raise our product assortment plus to go into new markets. Such an expansion will however demand a bigger effort and we ask you therefore to advise us in the case.
When our products don’t differ much from other fabricants, and when the models often change, we don’t think that we need to focus too much on the products. We think ourselves that there is more sanity to try to establish a stronger brand.
We are well known that other firms in the line of business have had fantastic big success with advertising, there is provoking, and we should maybe consider following the same strategy.
We hope you’re interested to work further with the case and we are looking forward to hear from you within the end of the week
Dear Sirs
In the clothing industry we experience in these years a very keen competition, and to survive is it important that our firm to constantly be in the limelight. This is the reason that we apply to you.
We are set about to examine the opportunities to extend our activities and think about among other things to raise our product assortment plus to go into new markets. Such an expansion will however demand a bigger effort and we ask you therefore to advise us in the case.
When our products don’t differ much from other fabricants, and when the models often change, we don’t think that we need to focus too much on the products. We think ourselves that there is more sanity to try to establish a stronger brand.
We are well known that other firms in the line of business have had fantastic big success with advertising, there is provoking, and we should maybe consider following the same strategy.
We hope you’re interested to work further with the case and we are looking forward to hear from you within the end of the week
Svar #1
15. maj 2007 af Bruger slettet (Slettet)
Hej!
Nedenstående mine forslag til rettelser. Jeg vil være lidt forsigtig med sammentrækninger i et forretningsbrev.
V.h.
Erik Morsing.
Dear Sirs
In the clothing industry we experience () these years a very keen competition, and to survive is it important that our firm (constantly stays) in the limelight. This is the reason (why) we apply to you.
We (have) set about to examine the opportunities to extend our activities and (to) think, (among other things, how to raise) our product assortment plus to go into new markets. Such an expansion will however demand a bigger effort and we (therefore ask you) to advise us in the case.
When our products (do not) differ much from (those of) other fabricants, and (because) the models often change, we (do not) think that we need (focusing) too much on the products. We think ourselves that there is more sanity to try to establish a stronger brand.
We are well (aware of the fact) that other firms in (the same) line of business have had success with advertising, there is provoking, and (maybe we should) consider following the (very) same strategy.
We hope (you’ll be) interested to work further with the case and we are looking forward to (hearing) from you within the end of (this) week
Nedenstående mine forslag til rettelser. Jeg vil være lidt forsigtig med sammentrækninger i et forretningsbrev.
V.h.
Erik Morsing.
Dear Sirs
In the clothing industry we experience () these years a very keen competition, and to survive is it important that our firm (constantly stays) in the limelight. This is the reason (why) we apply to you.
We (have) set about to examine the opportunities to extend our activities and (to) think, (among other things, how to raise) our product assortment plus to go into new markets. Such an expansion will however demand a bigger effort and we (therefore ask you) to advise us in the case.
When our products (do not) differ much from (those of) other fabricants, and (because) the models often change, we (do not) think that we need (focusing) too much on the products. We think ourselves that there is more sanity to try to establish a stronger brand.
We are well (aware of the fact) that other firms in (the same) line of business have had success with advertising, there is provoking, and (maybe we should) consider following the (very) same strategy.
We hope (you’ll be) interested to work further with the case and we are looking forward to (hearing) from you within the end of (this) week
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