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Rettelse - ordvændingerog sprogvalg
20. maj 2007 af
Kamelkalle (Slettet)
Hejsa (: Nogen som lige vil se pådenne lille tekst? - (Det er ikke en oversættelse) og fortælle mig, om mine ordvændinger og sprogvalg er godt nok?
Teksten:
Abby: "Why should we talk? I’ve never had it better. You on the other hand look unwell. You look afraid.. Are you afraid.. Of me? You know what?.. You’re pretty glorious.. Your eyes.. Amazingly blue like crystal clear water twinkling in the sunlight – You know what could make you even more beautiful? If your eyes could twinkling in the deep blue sea.. In water as cold as you eyes.. As your soul.. Icy – I could make it melt.. By fire melting your frozen soul.. Your eyes.. making them burn red-hot and glowing.. Warm bloody tears falling down your cheeks.. I’ll make you wheeze.. I’ll lick your cheek.. Let your red flamingly tears run down my tongue – my throat.. Taste that pleasingly sapidity.. Hot…"
Abby licks her lips and blinks at the doctor.
The doctor calls to nurses, who comes running in and grapes Abby, before she manages to get up. They hold her down and she just cooperates. One nurse gives her an injection and her eyes starts to wander. Abby starts crying.
Teksten:
Abby: "Why should we talk? I’ve never had it better. You on the other hand look unwell. You look afraid.. Are you afraid.. Of me? You know what?.. You’re pretty glorious.. Your eyes.. Amazingly blue like crystal clear water twinkling in the sunlight – You know what could make you even more beautiful? If your eyes could twinkling in the deep blue sea.. In water as cold as you eyes.. As your soul.. Icy – I could make it melt.. By fire melting your frozen soul.. Your eyes.. making them burn red-hot and glowing.. Warm bloody tears falling down your cheeks.. I’ll make you wheeze.. I’ll lick your cheek.. Let your red flamingly tears run down my tongue – my throat.. Taste that pleasingly sapidity.. Hot…"
Abby licks her lips and blinks at the doctor.
The doctor calls to nurses, who comes running in and grapes Abby, before she manages to get up. They hold her down and she just cooperates. One nurse gives her an injection and her eyes starts to wander. Abby starts crying.
Svar #1
20. maj 2007 af MHE (Slettet)
Det var da lidt af en... hed tekst! Nå, men here goes:
Abby: "Why should we talk? I've never had it better. You on the other hand look unwell. You look afraid.. Are you afraid.. Of me? You know what?.. You’re pretty glorious (det siger man ikke - FANTASTIC er bedre!).. Your eyes.. Amazingly blue like crystal clear water twinkling (SHINING) in the sunlight – You know what could make you even more beautiful? If your eyes could twinkling (GLIMMER) - ikke udvidet tid) in the deep blue sea.. In water as cold as youR eyes.. As your soul.. Icy – I could make it melt.. By fire melting your frozen soul.. Your eyes.. making (MAKE) them burn red-hot and glowing.. Warm bloody tears falling down your cheeks.. I’ll make you wheeze (GASP).. I’ll lick your cheek.. Let your red flamingly (FLAMING - adjektiv, ikke adverbium) tears run down my tongue – my throat.. Taste that pleasingly sapidity (den sætning er ikke helt god).. Hot…"
The doctor SHOUTS AT the nurses who RUN IN and GRAB Abby before SHE CAN MANAGE to get up. They hold her down and she cooperates. One nurse gives her an injection and ABBY's eyes start to water. SHE starts crying.
Abby: "Why should we talk? I've never had it better. You on the other hand look unwell. You look afraid.. Are you afraid.. Of me? You know what?.. You’re pretty glorious (det siger man ikke - FANTASTIC er bedre!).. Your eyes.. Amazingly blue like crystal clear water twinkling (SHINING) in the sunlight – You know what could make you even more beautiful? If your eyes could twinkling (GLIMMER) - ikke udvidet tid) in the deep blue sea.. In water as cold as youR eyes.. As your soul.. Icy – I could make it melt.. By fire melting your frozen soul.. Your eyes.. making (MAKE) them burn red-hot and glowing.. Warm bloody tears falling down your cheeks.. I’ll make you wheeze (GASP).. I’ll lick your cheek.. Let your red flamingly (FLAMING - adjektiv, ikke adverbium) tears run down my tongue – my throat.. Taste that pleasingly sapidity (den sætning er ikke helt god).. Hot…"
The doctor SHOUTS AT the nurses who RUN IN and GRAB Abby before SHE CAN MANAGE to get up. They hold her down and she cooperates. One nurse gives her an injection and ABBY's eyes start to water. SHE starts crying.
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