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21. april 2004 af
Usser (Slettet)
Mobile mania
Today over the half people from 11-18 year, has a mobile phone and the sale has increased during the last 5 year. The mobiles become very popular, almost every child has one and there has not been done anything about the mania. It’s has become a big part in our life.
There has been focused on that subject before in the media, it’s a dangerous thing and it can damage your brain or health.
I think that the mobile companies, should tell people what it can do to their health, and I am wondering why isn’t there any *compagin* who are against the mobile mania?
I think that the half of the consumer doesn’t know, that mobile phones are the cause of brain damage.
The people who talks on the phone while driving, are stupid, they endangered other people. Even if the police have forbidden it, have the mobile companies come up with a new invention, a headset mobile. Instead of holding in your hands, you can just put it in your pocket and talk trough the microphone from the headset, but excuse me, is it not the same? I have heard of a lot of accidents because of mobile phones. The human being is not able to concentrate on many different things at one time.
One of the statements is about phones in the school. “All mobile phones should be given to teachers for safekeeping”. I think the problem with mobile phones in school or class, is a big problem because everyone has a mobile phone, and the chance is very big for brain damage and disturbing. If it has to be avoiding shall the school say that, you have to switch your mobile off, before you go inside the front door, of the school. The children’s, who has forgotten, can look forward for a kind of “punishment”.
You can also set your mobile in “soundless” so you can’t hear when it rings, just feel the vibrator, if you have one. If a student has forgotten it, the teacher can take his mobile phone and give it to the inspector. That’s how we do it in our school.
My experience with the mobile phone is positive, because it’s good to have contact, example if you are to party, your parents can call you, and ask how you are. In that way you come in touch with someone if you are in problem.
I use my mobile phone everyday to talk with my friends and family, we talk about all kind of stuff, how I am, how the school is etc.
It’s very good to have a mobile, even if it’s bad for your health. There are so much worsened than the mobile phone. I like mobile phones, you feel very safe because you never now what can happen.
Today over the half people from 11-18 year, has a mobile phone and the sale has increased during the last 5 year. The mobiles become very popular, almost every child has one and there has not been done anything about the mania. It’s has become a big part in our life.
There has been focused on that subject before in the media, it’s a dangerous thing and it can damage your brain or health.
I think that the mobile companies, should tell people what it can do to their health, and I am wondering why isn’t there any *compagin* who are against the mobile mania?
I think that the half of the consumer doesn’t know, that mobile phones are the cause of brain damage.
The people who talks on the phone while driving, are stupid, they endangered other people. Even if the police have forbidden it, have the mobile companies come up with a new invention, a headset mobile. Instead of holding in your hands, you can just put it in your pocket and talk trough the microphone from the headset, but excuse me, is it not the same? I have heard of a lot of accidents because of mobile phones. The human being is not able to concentrate on many different things at one time.
One of the statements is about phones in the school. “All mobile phones should be given to teachers for safekeeping”. I think the problem with mobile phones in school or class, is a big problem because everyone has a mobile phone, and the chance is very big for brain damage and disturbing. If it has to be avoiding shall the school say that, you have to switch your mobile off, before you go inside the front door, of the school. The children’s, who has forgotten, can look forward for a kind of “punishment”.
You can also set your mobile in “soundless” so you can’t hear when it rings, just feel the vibrator, if you have one. If a student has forgotten it, the teacher can take his mobile phone and give it to the inspector. That’s how we do it in our school.
My experience with the mobile phone is positive, because it’s good to have contact, example if you are to party, your parents can call you, and ask how you are. In that way you come in touch with someone if you are in problem.
I use my mobile phone everyday to talk with my friends and family, we talk about all kind of stuff, how I am, how the school is etc.
It’s very good to have a mobile, even if it’s bad for your health. There are so much worsened than the mobile phone. I like mobile phones, you feel very safe because you never now what can happen.
Svar #1
21. april 2004 af JJ (Slettet)
Mobile Mania
Today, over half of the people between 11 and 18 years have a cell phone, and the sales have increased during the last 5 years. The phones have become very popular, and almost every child own one. Nothing has been done about the mania. It has become a big part in our lives.
The media has focused on the subject before, claiming that the radiation from the cellphones can damage your brain or health.
I think that the companies who produce the phones should tell people what the radiation can do to their health, and I am wondering why there is no campaigns against the mobile mania. I guess that half of the consumers do not even know that cell phones can cause brain damage.
The people who talk on the phone while driving are stupid; they endanger others. Even though the police has forbidden it, the phone companies have come up with a new invention, the headset cell phone.
Instead of holding it in your hand, you can just put it in your pocket and talk trough the microphone that is connected to it. But is it not the same? I have heard of a lot of accidents because of the hand-free phones.
One is not able to concentrate on many different things at a time.
One of the other statements is about phones in the school. “All cellphones should be given to teachers for safekeeping”. I think that phones in schools or classes are a big problem, because everyone has one, and the chance is very big for brain damage and disturbance. If this has to be avoided the school must demand that you switch off your phone before you go inside the front door.
The children who forgets it, should look forward to some kind of “punishment”. You can also put it on “silent”, which means that it does not ring when someone call you, just vibrates.
In case a student has forgotten it, the teacher can take his phone and give it to the inspector. That is how we do it on our school.
My experience with cell phones is positive, because it is nice to have quick contact. E.g. if you are at a party, your parents can call and ask how you are. In that way you can always get in touch with someone if you are in trouble.
I use my phone everyday to talk with my friends and family, and we talk about all kinds of things, like how I am, how the school is going, etc.
It is very good to have a cell phone, even if it is bad for your health. There is so much that is worse than the radiation from a cell phone. I like them, because you feel safer when having one.
You never now what can happen...
Rettet efter bedste evne;
JJ ^
Today, over half of the people between 11 and 18 years have a cell phone, and the sales have increased during the last 5 years. The phones have become very popular, and almost every child own one. Nothing has been done about the mania. It has become a big part in our lives.
The media has focused on the subject before, claiming that the radiation from the cellphones can damage your brain or health.
I think that the companies who produce the phones should tell people what the radiation can do to their health, and I am wondering why there is no campaigns against the mobile mania. I guess that half of the consumers do not even know that cell phones can cause brain damage.
The people who talk on the phone while driving are stupid; they endanger others. Even though the police has forbidden it, the phone companies have come up with a new invention, the headset cell phone.
Instead of holding it in your hand, you can just put it in your pocket and talk trough the microphone that is connected to it. But is it not the same? I have heard of a lot of accidents because of the hand-free phones.
One is not able to concentrate on many different things at a time.
One of the other statements is about phones in the school. “All cellphones should be given to teachers for safekeeping”. I think that phones in schools or classes are a big problem, because everyone has one, and the chance is very big for brain damage and disturbance. If this has to be avoided the school must demand that you switch off your phone before you go inside the front door.
The children who forgets it, should look forward to some kind of “punishment”. You can also put it on “silent”, which means that it does not ring when someone call you, just vibrates.
In case a student has forgotten it, the teacher can take his phone and give it to the inspector. That is how we do it on our school.
My experience with cell phones is positive, because it is nice to have quick contact. E.g. if you are at a party, your parents can call and ask how you are. In that way you can always get in touch with someone if you are in trouble.
I use my phone everyday to talk with my friends and family, and we talk about all kinds of things, like how I am, how the school is going, etc.
It is very good to have a cell phone, even if it is bad for your health. There is so much that is worse than the radiation from a cell phone. I like them, because you feel safer when having one.
You never now what can happen...
Rettet efter bedste evne;
JJ ^
Svar #2
21. april 2004 af Maj My (Slettet)
Er du tilfreds med din stil nu, eller skal jeg lige rette den igennem en ekstra gang?
(Jeg er journalist studerende tidl. bosat i New York og taler engelsk halvdelen af den tid jeg siger noget).
(Jeg er journalist studerende tidl. bosat i New York og taler engelsk halvdelen af den tid jeg siger noget).
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