Engelsk
RETTELSE
29. august 2007 af
meross (Slettet)
TRANSLATION
There were many stars at this years fashion show, which was hold in Bella centre.
The eyes of the fashion business were especially targeted at bestsellers new summer collection, which was introduced by many famous Danish models.
The girls fashion is taking a feminine direction, where the colours are in centrums.
The boys fashion will be quite masculine, inspirited by the 50 eth.
Jeans shall have rustic look and the designers have worked hard with develop ways to get the clothes to appear worn.
It is very important for the business to have goods employees.
That means something, that the working capacities is stead, and only have a little absence due to illness.
Therefore it riles the many bosses that the young workers apparently have rather bad attitude to work.
It might be that the young works quickly, but they have no sense of responsibility in proportion to there work.
A management pronounce: “we have just employed two co- workers on respectively 53 and 54 year.
Maybe the older generation works slower, but to return is it steadier”.
Experience shows that the firm’s problems are best handled, if the place of work has a good blending of older and younger employees
There were many stars at this years fashion show, which was hold in Bella centre.
The eyes of the fashion business were especially targeted at bestsellers new summer collection, which was introduced by many famous Danish models.
The girls fashion is taking a feminine direction, where the colours are in centrums.
The boys fashion will be quite masculine, inspirited by the 50 eth.
Jeans shall have rustic look and the designers have worked hard with develop ways to get the clothes to appear worn.
It is very important for the business to have goods employees.
That means something, that the working capacities is stead, and only have a little absence due to illness.
Therefore it riles the many bosses that the young workers apparently have rather bad attitude to work.
It might be that the young works quickly, but they have no sense of responsibility in proportion to there work.
A management pronounce: “we have just employed two co- workers on respectively 53 and 54 year.
Maybe the older generation works slower, but to return is it steadier”.
Experience shows that the firm’s problems are best handled, if the place of work has a good blending of older and younger employees
Svar #3
29. august 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
Mit forslag: (rettelser i parantes)
There were many stars at this (year’s) fashion show, which was (held) in (Bella Centret).
The eyes of the fashion business were especially targeted at bestsellers new summer collection, which was introduced by many famous Danish models.
The (girl’s) fashion (takes) a feminine direction, where colours are in centrums.
The (boy’s) fashion will be quite masculine, inspirited by the 50’ties.
Jeans (should) have (a) rustic look and the designers have worked hard with (developing) ways to get the clothes to appear worn.
It is very important for the business to have goods employees.
That means something, that the working capacities (are) (steady), and only have a little absence due to illness.
Therefore it riles the many bosses that the young workers apparently have rather bad attitude (towards) (working)
It might be that the (young people work) quickly, but they have no sense of responsibility in proportion to (their) work.
A management (pronounces): “we have just employed two co- workers on respectively 53 and 54 year.
Maybe the older generation (work) slower but (in) return (it seems more dependable).
Experience shows that the firm’s problems are best handled, if the place of work has a good (mixture) of (old) and (young) employees
There were many stars at this (year’s) fashion show, which was (held) in (Bella Centret).
The eyes of the fashion business were especially targeted at bestsellers new summer collection, which was introduced by many famous Danish models.
The (girl’s) fashion (takes) a feminine direction, where colours are in centrums.
The (boy’s) fashion will be quite masculine, inspirited by the 50’ties.
Jeans (should) have (a) rustic look and the designers have worked hard with (developing) ways to get the clothes to appear worn.
It is very important for the business to have goods employees.
That means something, that the working capacities (are) (steady), and only have a little absence due to illness.
Therefore it riles the many bosses that the young workers apparently have rather bad attitude (towards) (working)
It might be that the (young people work) quickly, but they have no sense of responsibility in proportion to (their) work.
A management (pronounces): “we have just employed two co- workers on respectively 53 and 54 year.
Maybe the older generation (work) slower but (in) return (it seems more dependable).
Experience shows that the firm’s problems are best handled, if the place of work has a good (mixture) of (old) and (young) employees
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