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Rettelse... Hvorfor har...
13. september 2007 af
Misfit (Slettet)
Hey, hvis nogen har tid til at rette det her, kunne det være ret godt...
Every history book is about men and men’s decisions, though the half world always has women. How did they live, what did they do, what thoughts did they have, what did they thought about life? These are some of the things, which female research workers have begun to interest them. One of them says: When I went to school, the women were described as passive and reactionary. But I couldn’t accept this prejudice. Neither that the women were forgotten. Therefore I now work with the new history writing. Of cause I think that history should be about man and not only women. But right now is it very important to concentred/focus about women, because they have been totally neglected. Therefore is it very important to criticise new history books, written by men about men. Instead we must write new history books, so the women can read about women and building up a historic identity. Only if the young generation of women learn to respect their ‘grandmothers’, can they learn to respect themselves.
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Every history book is about men and men’s decisions, though the half world always has women. How did they live, what did they do, what thoughts did they have, what did they thought about life? These are some of the things, which female research workers have begun to interest them. One of them says: When I went to school, the women were described as passive and reactionary. But I couldn’t accept this prejudice. Neither that the women were forgotten. Therefore I now work with the new history writing. Of cause I think that history should be about man and not only women. But right now is it very important to concentred/focus about women, because they have been totally neglected. Therefore is it very important to criticise new history books, written by men about men. Instead we must write new history books, so the women can read about women and building up a historic identity. Only if the young generation of women learn to respect their ‘grandmothers’, can they learn to respect themselves.
Takker
Svar #1
13. september 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
Jeg har sat klammer omkring det, der er forkert, og det der er mindre godt:
Every history book is about men and men’s decisions, though (the half world) (always has women). How did they live, what did they do, what thoughts did they have, what did they (thought) about life? These are some of the things, which female research workers (have begun to interest them). One of them (says): When I went to school, the women were described as passive and (reactionary). But I couldn’t accept this prejudice. (Neither that the women were forgotten). Therefore I now work with the new (history) writing. Of cause I think that history should be about (man) and not only women. But right now is it very important to (concentred/focus about) women, because they have been totally neglected. Therefore is it very important to (criticize) new history books, written by men about men. Instead we must write new history books, so() the women can read about women and (building) up a historic identity. Only if the young generation of women (learn) to respect their ‘grandmothers’, can they learn to respect themselves
Every history book is about men and men’s decisions, though (the half world) (always has women). How did they live, what did they do, what thoughts did they have, what did they (thought) about life? These are some of the things, which female research workers (have begun to interest them). One of them (says): When I went to school, the women were described as passive and (reactionary). But I couldn’t accept this prejudice. (Neither that the women were forgotten). Therefore I now work with the new (history) writing. Of cause I think that history should be about (man) and not only women. But right now is it very important to (concentred/focus about) women, because they have been totally neglected. Therefore is it very important to (criticize) new history books, written by men about men. Instead we must write new history books, so() the women can read about women and (building) up a historic identity. Only if the young generation of women (learn) to respect their ‘grandmothers’, can they learn to respect themselves
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