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"How it is to be turned down by somebody you love" stil
16. september 2007 af
Rosalou (Slettet)
Hej !
Jeg har kigget denne engelsk stil igennem et par gange, og ville lige høre om der ikke var en der havde tid til at tjekke den igennem, som har mere forstand på det end jeg :)
How it is to be turned down by somebody you love.
A boy walked around in his back yard. He could still fell the spring in the air. One flower caught his eye. A white rose with bright petals. He picked it up and looked at it. So interesting and so special. He wanted it, and took it with him…
I could sink to the bottom of him, without breathing in.
A warm and pleasant feeling had filled me up. Everything I did was totally thoughtless and I couldn’t concentrate at all. The only thing I thought about was him. All the bad and negative things, suddenly turned to be positive and great. War and injustice did not existed any more, and breaking world news were unimportant.
First day he met me, he told me that he never had seen such a special and mysterious girl before. I was in love and so was he. He wanted me and invited me inside his life…
But one thing I forgot was that love between two humans suddenly can disappear.
He didn’t loved me any more? For the first time in my life I felt like I was alone in the whole world. People could give me gift and tell me how much they loved me, but it didn’t matter at all. It was only his love I wanted. The only love that didn’t existed any more. Where did I go wrong? It's been so lonely without him here. Like a bird without a song!
The boy placed the white rose in a beautiful red vase. He gave it new fresh water every day and took care of it…
Day passed by and the red vase were getting dusty. The rose drooped for lack of water, and looked withered. It was not special any more. The life and the beauty in the rose was gone…
A boy walked around in his back yard. He could still fell the spring in the air. One flower caught his eye. A pink rose with bright petals. The rose prayed to god not to be picked up, only by somebody that really loved her.
På forhånd mange tusind tak!
Rosa
Jeg har kigget denne engelsk stil igennem et par gange, og ville lige høre om der ikke var en der havde tid til at tjekke den igennem, som har mere forstand på det end jeg :)
How it is to be turned down by somebody you love.
A boy walked around in his back yard. He could still fell the spring in the air. One flower caught his eye. A white rose with bright petals. He picked it up and looked at it. So interesting and so special. He wanted it, and took it with him…
I could sink to the bottom of him, without breathing in.
A warm and pleasant feeling had filled me up. Everything I did was totally thoughtless and I couldn’t concentrate at all. The only thing I thought about was him. All the bad and negative things, suddenly turned to be positive and great. War and injustice did not existed any more, and breaking world news were unimportant.
First day he met me, he told me that he never had seen such a special and mysterious girl before. I was in love and so was he. He wanted me and invited me inside his life…
But one thing I forgot was that love between two humans suddenly can disappear.
He didn’t loved me any more? For the first time in my life I felt like I was alone in the whole world. People could give me gift and tell me how much they loved me, but it didn’t matter at all. It was only his love I wanted. The only love that didn’t existed any more. Where did I go wrong? It's been so lonely without him here. Like a bird without a song!
The boy placed the white rose in a beautiful red vase. He gave it new fresh water every day and took care of it…
Day passed by and the red vase were getting dusty. The rose drooped for lack of water, and looked withered. It was not special any more. The life and the beauty in the rose was gone…
A boy walked around in his back yard. He could still fell the spring in the air. One flower caught his eye. A pink rose with bright petals. The rose prayed to god not to be picked up, only by somebody that really loved her.
På forhånd mange tusind tak!
Rosa
Svar #2
16. september 2007 af josemaria (Slettet)
How it is to be turned down by somebody you love.
A boy walked around in his back yard. He could still FEEL the spring in the air. One flower caught his eye. A white rose with bright petals. He picked it up and looked at it. So interesting and so special. He wanted it, and took it with him…
I could sink to the bottom of him, without breathing in.
A warm and pleasant feeling had filled me up. Everything I did was totally thoughtless and I couldn’t concentrate at all. The only thing I thought about, was him. All the bad and negative things, suddenly turned to be positive and great. War and injustice did not EXIST any more, and breaking world news were unimportant.
First day he met me, he told me that he never had seen such a special and mysterious girl before. I was in love and so was he. He wanted me and invited me into his life…
But one thing I forgot was that love between two humans suddenly can disappear.
He didn’t LOVE me any more? For the first time in my life I felt like I was alone in the whole world. People could give me gifts and tell me how much they loved me, but it didn’t matter at all. It was only his love I wanted. The only love that didn’t EXIST any more. ***Where did I go wrong*** It's been so lonely without him here. Like a bird without a song!
The boy placed the white rose in a beautiful red vase. He gave it new fresh water every day and took care of it…
Day passed by and the red vase were getting dusty. The rose dropped for lack of water, and looked withered. It was not special any more. The life and the beauty in the rose was gone…
A boy walked around in his back yard. He could still FEEL the spring in the air. One flower caught his eye. A pink rose with bright petals. The rose prayed to God not to be picked up, only by somebody that really loved IT.
Jeg har kun kigget på de grammatiske fejl, Isja.
*** Hvad mener du med dette?"Where did I go wrong?" På dansk: "Hvor gik jeg forkert?"***
Mener du ikke "Hvad gjorde jeg forkert?" eller "Hvad gik galt?"
A boy walked around in his back yard. He could still FEEL the spring in the air. One flower caught his eye. A white rose with bright petals. He picked it up and looked at it. So interesting and so special. He wanted it, and took it with him…
I could sink to the bottom of him, without breathing in.
A warm and pleasant feeling had filled me up. Everything I did was totally thoughtless and I couldn’t concentrate at all. The only thing I thought about, was him. All the bad and negative things, suddenly turned to be positive and great. War and injustice did not EXIST any more, and breaking world news were unimportant.
First day he met me, he told me that he never had seen such a special and mysterious girl before. I was in love and so was he. He wanted me and invited me into his life…
But one thing I forgot was that love between two humans suddenly can disappear.
He didn’t LOVE me any more? For the first time in my life I felt like I was alone in the whole world. People could give me gifts and tell me how much they loved me, but it didn’t matter at all. It was only his love I wanted. The only love that didn’t EXIST any more. ***Where did I go wrong*** It's been so lonely without him here. Like a bird without a song!
The boy placed the white rose in a beautiful red vase. He gave it new fresh water every day and took care of it…
Day passed by and the red vase were getting dusty. The rose dropped for lack of water, and looked withered. It was not special any more. The life and the beauty in the rose was gone…
A boy walked around in his back yard. He could still FEEL the spring in the air. One flower caught his eye. A pink rose with bright petals. The rose prayed to God not to be picked up, only by somebody that really loved IT.
Jeg har kun kigget på de grammatiske fejl, Isja.
*** Hvad mener du med dette?"Where did I go wrong?" På dansk: "Hvor gik jeg forkert?"***
Mener du ikke "Hvad gjorde jeg forkert?" eller "Hvad gik galt?"
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