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rettelse af oversættelse
26. september 2007 af
cav (Slettet)
Sidder her med en oversættelse, som jeg godt kunne tænke mig én eller anden lige gad at se lidt på og tage de værste fejl.
Emne: Personlige pronominer.
The Family Harrison.
The family Harrison lives just outside of Hastings in England. The family consists of Mr. Harrison, whom is a businessman, Mrs. Harrison, whom is a housewife and their two children Jennifer and Martin.
Jennifer is the eldest of the two of them, she is fifteen years old and goes to school at the locale comprehensive school, which is free. She has chosen the subjects math and biology, because she thinks, it will be more practical for her in the future. Because it is her big wish to become a vet – she loves animals – herself she has a dog, its name is Plim, and a dog.
Martin is six years younger. He goes in a private school, a preparatory school, because he is going to Rugby, one of the famous English Public Schools. Actually it is a misleading term, since Public Schools exactly not is public, but expensive private schools for boys, where it is very hard to get in. A lot of fathers want their sons to go at the same famous public school as they did when they where boys. Mr. Harrison went at Rugby. The preparatory school Martin is at (går på) is a bit away from their home and it is a bit difficult for them to get him in school every day. Mr. Harrison drives him by car in the morning, in the afternoon he has to take the train.
The school building is an old manor house. There are about 100 boys in the age eight till 13. Among other things they learn Latin and French and spend a lot of time on sport like soccer, cricket and rugby,
But right now has the family Harrison summer holiday, which they spend aboard on an yacht. It is a large family boat, which they all love; it is called “Albatros”.
Again this year they have planned to sail for Isle of Wight, in the English Cannel. It has a lovely climate and that is why there come to many tourists in the summer. Mr. Harrison thinks there is too many boats in the harbour, but the rest of the family would like to go back to the iceland.
Emne: Personlige pronominer.
The Family Harrison.
The family Harrison lives just outside of Hastings in England. The family consists of Mr. Harrison, whom is a businessman, Mrs. Harrison, whom is a housewife and their two children Jennifer and Martin.
Jennifer is the eldest of the two of them, she is fifteen years old and goes to school at the locale comprehensive school, which is free. She has chosen the subjects math and biology, because she thinks, it will be more practical for her in the future. Because it is her big wish to become a vet – she loves animals – herself she has a dog, its name is Plim, and a dog.
Martin is six years younger. He goes in a private school, a preparatory school, because he is going to Rugby, one of the famous English Public Schools. Actually it is a misleading term, since Public Schools exactly not is public, but expensive private schools for boys, where it is very hard to get in. A lot of fathers want their sons to go at the same famous public school as they did when they where boys. Mr. Harrison went at Rugby. The preparatory school Martin is at (går på) is a bit away from their home and it is a bit difficult for them to get him in school every day. Mr. Harrison drives him by car in the morning, in the afternoon he has to take the train.
The school building is an old manor house. There are about 100 boys in the age eight till 13. Among other things they learn Latin and French and spend a lot of time on sport like soccer, cricket and rugby,
But right now has the family Harrison summer holiday, which they spend aboard on an yacht. It is a large family boat, which they all love; it is called “Albatros”.
Again this year they have planned to sail for Isle of Wight, in the English Cannel. It has a lovely climate and that is why there come to many tourists in the summer. Mr. Harrison thinks there is too many boats in the harbour, but the rest of the family would like to go back to the iceland.
Svar #1
26. september 2007 af Phileo (Slettet)
Har ikke lige tid til at kigge det hele igennem, men her er der enkelte:
svjv hedder det bare 'who is a businessman - who is a hoursewife' etc.
Ikke locale, men local.
Her skal du huske omvendt ordstilling: But right now has the family Harrison summer holiday --> But right now the Harrison family has summer holiday.
Desuden ville jeg også bytte rundt på family og Harrison.
Ellers ganske udmærket.
svjv hedder det bare 'who is a businessman - who is a hoursewife' etc.
Ikke locale, men local.
Her skal du huske omvendt ordstilling: But right now has the family Harrison summer holiday --> But right now the Harrison family has summer holiday.
Desuden ville jeg også bytte rundt på family og Harrison.
Ellers ganske udmærket.
Svar #2
26. september 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
Hurtig gennemgang:
The (Harrison. family
The Harrison family lives just outside of Hastings in England. The family consists of Mr. Harrison, (who) is a businessman, Mrs. Harrison, (who) is a housewife and their two children Jennifer and Martin.
Jennifer is the eldest of the two(), she is fifteen years old and goes to school at the locale comprehensive school, which is free (of charge). She has chosen the subjects (mathematics) and biology, because she thinks, it will be more practical for her in the future. Because it is her big wish to become a vet – she loves animals – she has a dog of her own), its name is Plim..
Martin is six years younger. He goes in a private school, a preparatory school, because he (plays) Rugby, one of the famous English Public Schools. Actually it is a misleading term, since Public Schools exactly (is not) public, but (an) expensive private (school) for boys, where it is very hard to get in. A lot of fathers want their sons to go at the same famous public school as they did when they where boys. Mr. Harrison went at Rugby. The preparatory school Martin is at (går på)??? is a bit away from their home and it is a bit difficult for them to get him (to go to) school every day. Mr. Harrison drives him by car in the morning, in the afternoon he has to take the train.
The school building is an old manor house. There are about 100 boys in the age (of) eight till 13. Among other things they learn Latin and French and spend a lot of time on sport like soccer, cricket and rugby,
But right now (the Harroson family has their) summer holiday, which they spend (on board a) yacht. It is a large family boat, which they all love; it is called “Albatros”.
Again this year they have planned to sail (to the) Isle of Wight, in the English Cannel. It has a lovely climate and that is why (too) many tourists arrive) in the summer. Mr. Harrison thinks there (are) too many boats in the (harbor), but the rest of the family would like to go back to (Iceland).
The (Harrison. family
The Harrison family lives just outside of Hastings in England. The family consists of Mr. Harrison, (who) is a businessman, Mrs. Harrison, (who) is a housewife and their two children Jennifer and Martin.
Jennifer is the eldest of the two(), she is fifteen years old and goes to school at the locale comprehensive school, which is free (of charge). She has chosen the subjects (mathematics) and biology, because she thinks, it will be more practical for her in the future. Because it is her big wish to become a vet – she loves animals – she has a dog of her own), its name is Plim..
Martin is six years younger. He goes in a private school, a preparatory school, because he (plays) Rugby, one of the famous English Public Schools. Actually it is a misleading term, since Public Schools exactly (is not) public, but (an) expensive private (school) for boys, where it is very hard to get in. A lot of fathers want their sons to go at the same famous public school as they did when they where boys. Mr. Harrison went at Rugby. The preparatory school Martin is at (går på)??? is a bit away from their home and it is a bit difficult for them to get him (to go to) school every day. Mr. Harrison drives him by car in the morning, in the afternoon he has to take the train.
The school building is an old manor house. There are about 100 boys in the age (of) eight till 13. Among other things they learn Latin and French and spend a lot of time on sport like soccer, cricket and rugby,
But right now (the Harroson family has their) summer holiday, which they spend (on board a) yacht. It is a large family boat, which they all love; it is called “Albatros”.
Again this year they have planned to sail (to the) Isle of Wight, in the English Cannel. It has a lovely climate and that is why (too) many tourists arrive) in the summer. Mr. Harrison thinks there (are) too many boats in the (harbor), but the rest of the family would like to go back to (Iceland).
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