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This story shows how a man suddenly experiences the real life. When Lockhart found this girl, he is being surprised at such a young girl is not a student, but a homeless person. He thinks that young people are all students, and homeless people are elderly. But he realized the real life with this episode.
George Lockhart sounds like a pleasant (sympatisk) man, when he offering the girl to come inside his flat to sleep there. This is not a “normal” reaction. I would never offer a stranger homeless person to come inside my house. Lockhart’s neighbours’ react quite normal, when they said to the girl to go away. So it shows that Lockhart is a “very” nice guy and he hesitates not to invite people inside his home.
Lockhart is a lonely man and it sounds like he misses his ex-wife, Elaine. He is talking about that Elaine got his and hers old double bed there is very comfortable. And he has now a expensive bed, scientifically designed for the sleepless, but single. This tells that he miss Elaine a lot, somebody to share his life with, he want a double bed. And he must be a very alone person, because he notices all sounds around him, and not just ignore it and do something ells.