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Hej jeg har skrevet om apartheid og hvad jeg selv synes om den. Er der ikke nogle der vil tjekke hvad der mangler og rette grammatikken lidt hist og her.

My opinion about apartheid

I cannot see the reason for getting a racists system in South Africa. Why is the system being included at all? All in the societies need their human rights, why do the white people getting more power in the system, are we not all same peoples? Some peoples got a black skin, and some got white skin color. But see it from the real angle, we are all coming from the same race, but why did they not realized that? I could mention a whole of opinions, but first of all I want to tell you about, the time where the entire story of the system apartheid broke under way.

It all started in the year 1948 where there was a choice of parties. Unfortunately a party that wanted to include apartheid won, and in that time they got the handlebars over the country. There were many problems on that period, and some deadly fights arose. We can hint to some protests that arose and led to many deaths, where the police came about distress to kill many Protestants witch where about to protest against the apartheid system, I can unfortunately not remember those two cities where these problems arose, but the number of deaths is about 150-250. The police could not stop the protestants so, they where “distress” to kill them, after they had tried with resources and threaten with their police dogs. Do you think that, that is a fair solution?

But fortunately in 1952 Nelson Mandela wanted to help the back peoples, who had some problems with the apartheid laws, so they started a law firm in that period. After the two years had passed, Nelson Mandela was selected to be vice-president in ANC (African National Council). Nelson Mandela was a guy that all the back peoples saw up to, he really wanted to help the back peoples and gave very much time of his life to the country, he wanted to get justice between the black peoples and the white, and all should get their rights. But unfortunately in 1957 he was arrested. It was said that ANC wanted to overthrow the government. The trial lasted on long time, but Nelson Mandela was acquitted on all charges. Nelson Mandela was not spilling his time. In July 1990 he was chosen as president of ANC, and in 1993 he won the Nobel Prize for peace with F. W. de Klerk. In April 1994 he was chosen president of South Africa. It was the first choice where people of every color could vote, this where a great history for South Africa, and today they all remember Nelson Mandela as a great historically person. If Nelson did not emerge into the light those periods, then today it still could be a negative situation for the people of South Africa. But I do not think that the people today could let that happen, today we all got a bit of intelligence to take care of other peoples in distress.

That was a bit of the history I just had mentioned, I had not told everything about the history of apartheid, if I did, it could last very long time. In the text were I mentioned about the history of apartheid and South Africa, we got into some important situations for South Africa, we had talked about the historically person Nelson Mandela that helped South Africa when they were in distress, and he did not just helped the peoples on south Africa, but he did also helped himself. Do not forget, that he also were an inhabitant in South Africa too. Today he is known as one of the most
respected statesmen in the world. Nelson Mandela went against his believes, he got a great self confidence against his wishes for the country. He wanted to get that justice in the country it needed. All in all we could say, that South Africa were needing help, because of the critically situation they were in. Nelson Mandela got my full compassion; all kind of people in the word should be respected, even though it is a black man or woman, or a white man or woman.

In 1996 there was made a new constitution that guaranteed equal rights for everybody no matter which color they had. That period, the constitution I liked came out to the light. Rights should be possible for anyone. In 1998 Nelson Mandela realized that it was the time to step back, he had successfully completed his wishes and he make the inhabitants presence nice at their own country, just as it should be.