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30. september 2007 af
santra (Slettet)
nogen der kan rette grammatiske fejl for mig ??
Phoolan Devi has been called the Robin Hood of India. She wouldn’t accept her fait as a poor low-caste girl, who could be treated of high-caste people, as they liked. She wasn’t allowed going to school but as 11 year old got married with an extremely violent man, who she escaped from. Afterwards she joined a gang of robbers whose leader became her lover. Later he got killed, and his murders both hit and raped Devi. Then she made her own gang of robbers, who killed 20 high-caste men, who she was sure, had been involved in raping her. After being in prison for these murder’s she still, at the same time, finally succeeded in being chosen in to the Indian parliament in 1996 where she among other things fought for abrogation of children’s work and more rights for women, a job, that led to that she was minded for the Nobel’s price of peace. But just five years later she got murdered and the murder still isn’t solved.
Phoolan Devi has been called the Robin Hood of India. She wouldn’t accept her fait as a poor low-caste girl, who could be treated of high-caste people, as they liked. She wasn’t allowed going to school but as 11 year old got married with an extremely violent man, who she escaped from. Afterwards she joined a gang of robbers whose leader became her lover. Later he got killed, and his murders both hit and raped Devi. Then she made her own gang of robbers, who killed 20 high-caste men, who she was sure, had been involved in raping her. After being in prison for these murder’s she still, at the same time, finally succeeded in being chosen in to the Indian parliament in 1996 where she among other things fought for abrogation of children’s work and more rights for women, a job, that led to that she was minded for the Nobel’s price of peace. But just five years later she got murdered and the murder still isn’t solved.
Svar #1
30. september 2007 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
Phoolan Devi has been called the Robin Hood of India.
She would not put up with her destiny as a poor low-caste girl, who could be treated by high-caste people anyway they wanted.
She was not allowed to go to school, but was at age 11 married to an extremely violent man, whom she fleed.
After this she joined a robbery gang, whose leader became her lover.
He was later killed and his murderers both beat and raped Devi.
So she formed her own gang of robbers, who killed 20 high-caste men, whom she believed had taken part in her rape.
After being imprisoned for these murders, she did, however, manage to be elected for the Indian Parliament in 1996, where she - among other things - fought for the abolition of child labour and more rights for women - a task which contributed towards her nomination for the Nobel peace prize.
However, she was killed only 5 years later and her murder has not been solved.
She would not put up with her destiny as a poor low-caste girl, who could be treated by high-caste people anyway they wanted.
She was not allowed to go to school, but was at age 11 married to an extremely violent man, whom she fleed.
After this she joined a robbery gang, whose leader became her lover.
He was later killed and his murderers both beat and raped Devi.
So she formed her own gang of robbers, who killed 20 high-caste men, whom she believed had taken part in her rape.
After being imprisoned for these murders, she did, however, manage to be elected for the Indian Parliament in 1996, where she - among other things - fought for the abolition of child labour and more rights for women - a task which contributed towards her nomination for the Nobel peace prize.
However, she was killed only 5 years later and her murder has not been solved.
Svar #3
04. oktober 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
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"but was at age 11"
det kan godt være, man kan sige det, men måske ville jeg foretrække:
but was at the age of 11
jeg kan ikke huske at have set det andet.
"but was at age 11"
det kan godt være, man kan sige det, men måske ville jeg foretrække:
but was at the age of 11
jeg kan ikke huske at have set det andet.
Svar #4
04. oktober 2007 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
#3.
Jeg kan egentligt også bedst lide den sidste, nu når du gør opmærksom på det. Selvom det ikke er forkert.
Politikens ordbog:
alder;
hun blev gift i en ~ af 16 år = she was married at age 16; she was married at the age of 16
Jeg kan egentligt også bedst lide den sidste, nu når du gør opmærksom på det. Selvom det ikke er forkert.
Politikens ordbog:
alder;
hun blev gift i en ~ af 16 år = she was married at age 16; she was married at the age of 16
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