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oversættelse... rettelse
06. oktober 2007 af
solsikke (Slettet)
Hej er der nogen der gider at kigge min oversættelse igennem for fejl? Jeg er rimelig dårlig til engelsk, så der er nok en del af dem.
I den indusrtialiserede verden er overvægt et alvorligt problem, bade hos børn og voksne. Hver dag kan børn og unge sidde foran TV-apparatet og fortære den ene reklame efter den anden om, som er rig på fedt og sukker. Børns stillesiddende liv og mangel på motion øger deres risiko for fedme. Mange udvikler et spiseproblem, som kan føre til sukkersyge, hjertetilfælde eller andre fedmerelaterede sygdomme. I stedet for hele tiden at tage på bør børnene ændre deres livsstil og spisevaner. De skal spise sund, nærende og velsmagende kost sammen med familien og blive opmærksomme på situationen andre steder I verden. I tredjeverdens-lande er situationen en ganske anden. Millioner af børn får ikke dækket deres daglige kaloriebehov, og tusinder sulter ihjel. For dem, er underernæring på grund af manglen på mad det største problem.
In the industrialized world is overweight a serious problem, for both children and adults.
Every day can children and young people sit in front of the TV and devour one commercial after another about food, which are rich on fat and sugar. Children’s inactive life and want of exercise increases their risk of being fat. Many develop an eating problem, which can result in diabetes, heart attack or other obesity related illnesses.
Instead of gain weight should the children change their life stile and eating stile. They should eat healthy, nourishing and tasty food together with the family and be aware of the situation other places in the world. In the Third World-countries is the situation quite different. Millions of children don’t get their daily calorie need, and thousands are starving to death. For them are undernourising on account of the want of food the biggest problem.
I den indusrtialiserede verden er overvægt et alvorligt problem, bade hos børn og voksne. Hver dag kan børn og unge sidde foran TV-apparatet og fortære den ene reklame efter den anden om, som er rig på fedt og sukker. Børns stillesiddende liv og mangel på motion øger deres risiko for fedme. Mange udvikler et spiseproblem, som kan føre til sukkersyge, hjertetilfælde eller andre fedmerelaterede sygdomme. I stedet for hele tiden at tage på bør børnene ændre deres livsstil og spisevaner. De skal spise sund, nærende og velsmagende kost sammen med familien og blive opmærksomme på situationen andre steder I verden. I tredjeverdens-lande er situationen en ganske anden. Millioner af børn får ikke dækket deres daglige kaloriebehov, og tusinder sulter ihjel. For dem, er underernæring på grund af manglen på mad det største problem.
In the industrialized world is overweight a serious problem, for both children and adults.
Every day can children and young people sit in front of the TV and devour one commercial after another about food, which are rich on fat and sugar. Children’s inactive life and want of exercise increases their risk of being fat. Many develop an eating problem, which can result in diabetes, heart attack or other obesity related illnesses.
Instead of gain weight should the children change their life stile and eating stile. They should eat healthy, nourishing and tasty food together with the family and be aware of the situation other places in the world. In the Third World-countries is the situation quite different. Millions of children don’t get their daily calorie need, and thousands are starving to death. For them are undernourising on account of the want of food the biggest problem.
Svar #1
06. oktober 2007 af *MissSofie (Slettet)
In the industrialized world overweight is a serious problem, both children and adults.
Every day children and young people CAN sit in front of the TELEVISION and devour one commercial after another, which ARE rich on fat and sugar. Children’s inactive life and LACK of exercise increases their risk of OBESITY. Many develop an eating DISORDER/PROBLEM which can result in diabetes, heart attack or other obesity related illnesses.
Instead of GAINING weight all the time, the children should change their LIFESTYLE and EATING HABITS. They should eat healthy, nourishing and tasty food together with the family and be aware of the situation, other places in the world. In the Third World-countries, the situation IS quite different. Millions of children do not get their daily calorie needs covered, and thousands are starving to death. To them is MALNUTRITION/UNDERNOURISHMENT**, because of the lack of food, the biggest problem.
** undernourishment - The undernourishment of the animals appalled the volunteers
* malnutrition - The children's malnutrition shocked them
Every day children and young people CAN sit in front of the TELEVISION and devour one commercial after another, which ARE rich on fat and sugar. Children’s inactive life and LACK of exercise increases their risk of OBESITY. Many develop an eating DISORDER/PROBLEM which can result in diabetes, heart attack or other obesity related illnesses.
Instead of GAINING weight all the time, the children should change their LIFESTYLE and EATING HABITS. They should eat healthy, nourishing and tasty food together with the family and be aware of the situation, other places in the world. In the Third World-countries, the situation IS quite different. Millions of children do not get their daily calorie needs covered, and thousands are starving to death. To them is MALNUTRITION/UNDERNOURISHMENT**, because of the lack of food, the biggest problem.
** undernourishment - The undernourishment of the animals appalled the volunteers
* malnutrition - The children's malnutrition shocked them
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