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07. oktober 2007 af
Hans Jensen123 (Slettet)
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Dansk:
Mita befinder sig nu alene i USA, et land hun kom til i troen på, at hun skulle leve et nyt liv sammen med sin nye mand. Hun er kommet til mulighedernes land. Et land hvor der er plads til de personer, som vil udleve den amerikanske drøm. Hendes mand kom til USA for at udleve denne drøm, men døde i forsøget. Mita besluttede sig for at gå videre med sin mands forsøg på at udleve den amerikanske drøm. Hun vender ikke tilbage til sin familie. Hun forbliver i USA, hvor hun begynder at læse til lærer. I starten skrammer det hende, at være alene i det nye mystiske land, men hver gang hun er lige ved at fortryde sit valg, tænker hun tilbage på hendes mands kamp for drømmen. Drømmen om at skabe sig et liv i USA, uanset ens baggrund og økonomi; en drøm der kun er mulig ved hårdt arbejde.
I dag er Mita lærer i et amerikansk High School, hun underviser eleverne i engelsk og kunst og hun er meget glad for sit arbejde. Hun har ikke fundet sig en ny mand, da hun stadig lever med mindet om hendes afdøde mand. Manden der fik hende til USA, manden der præsenterede hende for landet af muligheder; landet af drømme.
Engelsk:
Mita now finds herself quite alone in the USA, a country she came to, believing that she was going to live a new life together with her new husband. She has come to the land of opportunities. A country providing place and space for the people who wish to act out the American dream. Her husband came to the USA to act out this dream, but died trying. Mita decided to take her husband’s attempt to act out the American dream further. She does not return to her family. She stays in the USA, where she begins to study to become a teacher. To begin with it frightens her to be alone in the new mysterious country but every time she almost regrets her choice, she thinks about her husband and his fight for this dream. The dream to create a new life in the USA, irrespective of background and economy; a dream which is only possible through hard work.
Today, Mita is a teacher in a High School in America, and she teaches the students English and art, and she is very happy with her job. She has not found herself a new husband, as she is still living with the memory of her deceased husband. The man who got her to travel to the USA, the man who introduced the land of opportunities to her, the land of dreams.
Dansk:
Mita befinder sig nu alene i USA, et land hun kom til i troen på, at hun skulle leve et nyt liv sammen med sin nye mand. Hun er kommet til mulighedernes land. Et land hvor der er plads til de personer, som vil udleve den amerikanske drøm. Hendes mand kom til USA for at udleve denne drøm, men døde i forsøget. Mita besluttede sig for at gå videre med sin mands forsøg på at udleve den amerikanske drøm. Hun vender ikke tilbage til sin familie. Hun forbliver i USA, hvor hun begynder at læse til lærer. I starten skrammer det hende, at være alene i det nye mystiske land, men hver gang hun er lige ved at fortryde sit valg, tænker hun tilbage på hendes mands kamp for drømmen. Drømmen om at skabe sig et liv i USA, uanset ens baggrund og økonomi; en drøm der kun er mulig ved hårdt arbejde.
I dag er Mita lærer i et amerikansk High School, hun underviser eleverne i engelsk og kunst og hun er meget glad for sit arbejde. Hun har ikke fundet sig en ny mand, da hun stadig lever med mindet om hendes afdøde mand. Manden der fik hende til USA, manden der præsenterede hende for landet af muligheder; landet af drømme.
Engelsk:
Mita now finds herself quite alone in the USA, a country she came to, believing that she was going to live a new life together with her new husband. She has come to the land of opportunities. A country providing place and space for the people who wish to act out the American dream. Her husband came to the USA to act out this dream, but died trying. Mita decided to take her husband’s attempt to act out the American dream further. She does not return to her family. She stays in the USA, where she begins to study to become a teacher. To begin with it frightens her to be alone in the new mysterious country but every time she almost regrets her choice, she thinks about her husband and his fight for this dream. The dream to create a new life in the USA, irrespective of background and economy; a dream which is only possible through hard work.
Today, Mita is a teacher in a High School in America, and she teaches the students English and art, and she is very happy with her job. She has not found herself a new husband, as she is still living with the memory of her deceased husband. The man who got her to travel to the USA, the man who introduced the land of opportunities to her, the land of dreams.
Svar #1
07. oktober 2007 af Hans Jensen123 (Slettet)
#0.
Ny version:
Mita now finds herself quite alone in the USA, a country she came to, believing that she was going to live a new life together with her new husband. She has come to the land of opportunities. It is a country providing place and space for the people who wish to live out the American dream. Her husband came to the USA to live out this dream, but died trying. Mita decided to take her husband’s attempt to act out the American dream further. She does not return to her family. She stays in the USA, where she begins to study in order to become a teacher. To begin with it frightens her being alone in the new mysterious country but she almost constantly regrets her choice, she thinks about her husband and his fight for his dream. The dream to create a new life in the USA, irrespective of the background and the economy; a dream which seems only possible through hard work.
Today, Mita is a teacher in a High School in America, and she teaches the students English and art, and she is very fond of her job. She has not found herself a new husband, as she is still living with the memory of her deceased husband. The man who made her travel to the USA, the man who introduced her to the land of opportunities to her, the land where dreams come through.
Ny version:
Mita now finds herself quite alone in the USA, a country she came to, believing that she was going to live a new life together with her new husband. She has come to the land of opportunities. It is a country providing place and space for the people who wish to live out the American dream. Her husband came to the USA to live out this dream, but died trying. Mita decided to take her husband’s attempt to act out the American dream further. She does not return to her family. She stays in the USA, where she begins to study in order to become a teacher. To begin with it frightens her being alone in the new mysterious country but she almost constantly regrets her choice, she thinks about her husband and his fight for his dream. The dream to create a new life in the USA, irrespective of the background and the economy; a dream which seems only possible through hard work.
Today, Mita is a teacher in a High School in America, and she teaches the students English and art, and she is very fond of her job. She has not found herself a new husband, as she is still living with the memory of her deceased husband. The man who made her travel to the USA, the man who introduced her to the land of opportunities to her, the land where dreams come through.
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