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14. november 2007 af Ponine (Slettet)
Tænkte om der var en venlig sjæl der lige ville kigge dette igennem og komme med lidt rettelser.

In spite of the police had banned the demonstrations there were many hundreds of young people in London to demonstrate against the government. The most of the demonstrators wanted to express their opinions, but few of them started to smash shop windows and they got arrested by the police. When that happened, the rest of the demonstrators lay down and had to be carried away. Only after several hours the police succeeded to restore order.

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Svar #1
14. november 2007 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Og den originale tekst?

TanteOda

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14. november 2007 af favl (Slettet)

In spite of the fact that the police had banned the demonstrations, there were hundreds of young people in London to demonstrate against the government. Most of the demonstrators wanted to share their opinions, but some of them started smashing shop windows and they got arrested by the police. During the arrests, the remaining of the demonstrators lay down and had to be carried away. Not before several hours later, the police had succesfully restored order.

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14. november 2007 af favl (Slettet)

Ja, det var måske lidt nemmere med den originale tekst...

/Fred

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Svar #4
14. november 2007 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Øøøh.. bare rolig, jeg er kun forvirret. Du har fået en vrøvle-tekst #2 som du skal renskrive, som du har gjort i #0, korrekt forstået?

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Svar #5
14. november 2007 af favl (Slettet)

Hvad? Nu er JEG forvirret? lol...

Svar #6
14. november 2007 af Ponine (Slettet)

original tekst er her:

PÅ trods af politiet havde forbudt demonstrationer, var er mange hundrede unge i London for at demonstrere mod regeringen. De fleste af demonstranterne ville blot udtrykke deres holdninder men nogle få begyndte at smadre butiskruder og blev arresteret af politiet. Da det skete lagde de øvrige demonstranter sig ned og måtte bæres væk. Først flere timer senere var det lykkedes politiet at genoprette ro og orden.

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Svar #7
14. november 2007 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

En "vrøvle-tekst" er vist ikke helt fair.

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Svar #8
14. november 2007 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Mit bud:

Even though the police had prohibited demonstrations, there were hundreds of young people in London to demonstrate against the government. Most of the demonstrators just sought after expressing their attitudes, however, a few began smashing shop windows and were arrested by the police. As this happened, the rest of the demonstrators laid down and had to be carried way. Not until several hours later, the police successfully restored order.

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Svar #9
14. november 2007 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

#8.
way --> away

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Svar #10
15. november 2007 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Så misforstår du mig Zeta!

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