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Dansk-Engelsk oversættelse (rettelse)
18. november 2007 af
Cutie-Pei (Slettet)
Jeg skal oversætte en tekst fra dansk til engelsk og jeg mangler at få den rettet, så det ville være virkelig dejligt, hvis i kunne hjælpe mig lidt.
Den dansk tekst ser således ud:
I den industrialiserede verden er overvægt et alvorligt problem, bade hos børn og voksne. Hver dag kan børn og unge sidde foran Tv-apparatet og fortære den ene reklame efter den anden om mad, som er rig på fedt og sukker. Børns stillesiddende liv og mangel på motion øger deres risiko for fedme. Mange udvikler et spiseproblem, som kan føre til sukkersyge, hjertetilfælde eller andre fedmerelaterede sygdomme. I stedet for hele tiden at tage på bør børnene ændre deres livsstil og spisevaner. De skal spise sundt, nærende og velsmagende kost sammen med familien og blive opmærksomme på situationen andre steder i verden.
I tredjeverdens-lande er situationen en ganske anden. Millioner af børn får ikke dækket deres daglige kaloriebehov, og tusinder sulter ihjel. For dem er underernæring på grund af manglen på mad det største problem.
Min oversættelse ser således ud:
Obesity is a serious problem in the industrialized world both for children and adults. Every day children and young people can watch TV and consume one commercial after another about food with a large fat and sugar content. Children’ sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise puts them at risk of developing obesity. A good many develop an eating disorder, which can lead to diabetes, heart attacks and other obesity related diseases. In stet of piling on the kilos all the time, children should change their lifestyle and eating habits. They have to eat healthy, nourishing and delicious food with their family and become aware of the situation other places in the world.
It is quite a different situation in third world countries. Million of children don’t get their daily calorie need and thousands starve to death. For them malnutrition caused by lack of food is the biggest problem.
Håber i gider at bruge lidt tid på at hjælpe mig (:
Den dansk tekst ser således ud:
I den industrialiserede verden er overvægt et alvorligt problem, bade hos børn og voksne. Hver dag kan børn og unge sidde foran Tv-apparatet og fortære den ene reklame efter den anden om mad, som er rig på fedt og sukker. Børns stillesiddende liv og mangel på motion øger deres risiko for fedme. Mange udvikler et spiseproblem, som kan føre til sukkersyge, hjertetilfælde eller andre fedmerelaterede sygdomme. I stedet for hele tiden at tage på bør børnene ændre deres livsstil og spisevaner. De skal spise sundt, nærende og velsmagende kost sammen med familien og blive opmærksomme på situationen andre steder i verden.
I tredjeverdens-lande er situationen en ganske anden. Millioner af børn får ikke dækket deres daglige kaloriebehov, og tusinder sulter ihjel. For dem er underernæring på grund af manglen på mad det største problem.
Min oversættelse ser således ud:
Obesity is a serious problem in the industrialized world both for children and adults. Every day children and young people can watch TV and consume one commercial after another about food with a large fat and sugar content. Children’ sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise puts them at risk of developing obesity. A good many develop an eating disorder, which can lead to diabetes, heart attacks and other obesity related diseases. In stet of piling on the kilos all the time, children should change their lifestyle and eating habits. They have to eat healthy, nourishing and delicious food with their family and become aware of the situation other places in the world.
It is quite a different situation in third world countries. Million of children don’t get their daily calorie need and thousands starve to death. For them malnutrition caused by lack of food is the biggest problem.
Håber i gider at bruge lidt tid på at hjælpe mig (:
Svar #1
18. november 2007 af Isomorphician
Obesity is a serious problem in the industrialized world for children as well as for adults. Every day children and young people can watch TV and consume one commercial after another about food that has a high fat and sugar content. Children's sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise puts them at risk of developing obesity. Many develop an eating disorder which can lead to diabetes, heart attacks and other obesity related illnesses. In stead of gaining weight all the time, children should change their lifestyles and eating habits. They have to eat healthy, nourishing and delicious foods with their families and become aware of the situation in other parts of the world.
It is quite a different situation in third world countries. Millions of children do not get their daily need of calories and thousands starve to death. To them malnutrition caused by lack of food is the biggest problem.
It is quite a different situation in third world countries. Millions of children do not get their daily need of calories and thousands starve to death. To them malnutrition caused by lack of food is the biggest problem.
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