Hjælp til rettelse

Hej, det nedenstående handler om forskelle mellem to personer; Billie Holiday og C.P. Ellis, som vi havde beskæftiget os med. Er der nogen der vil læse den igennem og rette for fejl, både grammatisk og ordstilling. Håber I kan Hjælpe mig. På forhånd mange tak.

Difference between Billie Holiday and C.P. Ellis:
The difference between this people is their race, Billie Holiday is descent from a black family, and opposite C.P Ellis is descent from a white family. In those times when there was civil war, there were big hate of black people; white people ill-treated them as a slave. C.P. Ellis was only one of this white people; he was member of Ku Klux Klan, which we also had seen in the film, people whit white dresses, which blamed black people for lost the civil war.

Billie Holidays mother work for white people, and she didn’t have anything against them, because they were paying for her work. Billie Holidays life was more difficult then C.P. Ellis, because she was a girl or in another word a women at six. Boys can always protect them selves, but girls were not strong like them. Billie was involved rape.

Billie Holiday had never had a family; she did never marry and never get child. Which C.P Ellis did; he gets married and gets four children.

Similar between Billie Holiday and C.P. Ellis:
Billie Holiday and C.P Ellis had both a difficult childhood. They were both poor, and had to work hard to survive. “When you’re poor you grow up fast”, this two people didn’t lead their childhood. C.P. Ellis had to quit school and go to work. Billie Holiday was grow up as a women, she didn’t had any chance to lead her childhood, because she had to help her mother, and earn money to survive.