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05. december 2007 af
Klara2 (Slettet)
hej alle sammen...
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På forhånd tak...
We in Denmark caught by fatness epidemic special us younger human being there is most udsat. We are younger exercise all for bite and eaten much for much there content sugar and fat. I think it’s stupid that they most younger sitting too bit a inside and they sitting most in front screen and not right think over where much the not for moved himself, because they are much busy of screen.
We younger goes obvious to Mac Donald’s and Pizzeria. Well are hungry, because it is approve of than restaurant. If you did Mac Donald’s and Pizzeria expensive, that Restaurant will we younger enough no eat so highly unwholesome and to they most will enough purchase fruit instead.
Den er også på dansk, hvis i ikke kan forstå hvad jeg har skrevet.
I Danmark er vi blevet ramt af fedmeepidemi specielt os unge mennesker der er mest udsat. Vi unge motionerer alt for lidt og spiser alt for meget der indeholder sukker og fedt. Jeg synes, det er dumt at de fleste unger sidder meget indenfor og de sidder mest foran skærmen og ikke rigtig tænker over
hvor meget de ikke for rørt sig, fordi de er så meget optaget af skærmen.
Vi unge går selvfølgelig til Mac Donalds og pizzeria når vi er sulten, fordi det billigere end restauranter. Hvis man gjorde Mac Donalds og pizzeria dyr, som restauranter vil vi unge nok ikke spise så meget usundt og at de fleste vil nok købe frugter i stedet for.
Det vil være en stor hjælp hvis i gider rette en kort tekst..
På forhånd tak...
We in Denmark caught by fatness epidemic special us younger human being there is most udsat. We are younger exercise all for bite and eaten much for much there content sugar and fat. I think it’s stupid that they most younger sitting too bit a inside and they sitting most in front screen and not right think over where much the not for moved himself, because they are much busy of screen.
We younger goes obvious to Mac Donald’s and Pizzeria. Well are hungry, because it is approve of than restaurant. If you did Mac Donald’s and Pizzeria expensive, that Restaurant will we younger enough no eat so highly unwholesome and to they most will enough purchase fruit instead.
Den er også på dansk, hvis i ikke kan forstå hvad jeg har skrevet.
I Danmark er vi blevet ramt af fedmeepidemi specielt os unge mennesker der er mest udsat. Vi unge motionerer alt for lidt og spiser alt for meget der indeholder sukker og fedt. Jeg synes, det er dumt at de fleste unger sidder meget indenfor og de sidder mest foran skærmen og ikke rigtig tænker over
hvor meget de ikke for rørt sig, fordi de er så meget optaget af skærmen.
Vi unge går selvfølgelig til Mac Donalds og pizzeria når vi er sulten, fordi det billigere end restauranter. Hvis man gjorde Mac Donalds og pizzeria dyr, som restauranter vil vi unge nok ikke spise så meget usundt og at de fleste vil nok købe frugter i stedet for.
Svar #2
05. december 2007 af Isomorphician
In Denmark we have caught the obesity epidemic, especially us young people are exposed the most. We don't exercise enough and we eat too much food saturated with sugar and fat. I think it's stupid that young people sit indoors in front of the TV and don't mind that they don't exercise enough because they are too absorbed by the screen.
Of course we go to McDonald's and pizzerias when we are hungry because it is cheaper than restaurants . If you were to make McDonald's and pizzerias as expensive as restaurants, we would probably not eat as unhealthy and most would buy more fruits instead.
Of course we go to McDonald's and pizzerias when we are hungry because it is cheaper than restaurants . If you were to make McDonald's and pizzerias as expensive as restaurants, we would probably not eat as unhealthy and most would buy more fruits instead.
Svar #4
05. december 2007 af Da-ted (Slettet)
Lige et lille notat: Det er pænest engelsk at skrive did not i stedet for didn't og do not i stedet for don't
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