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rettelse af en mini - tekst
09. december 2007 af
sukkertrold-xD (Slettet)
Hejsa, det ville være dejligt, hvis der var en der ville rette :)
As we both are aware of, bullying is a huge problem. Therefore I am now writing to you about a possible way of this problem. It is a problem that is raising year after year and that is what we all need to change. Try to think about it, if we all stop the bullying together then we are not going to have depressed, retarded and suppress children or a grown up. Everybody can go to school, kindergarten and work, with out having the feeling of fear to get bullied. I have made a four - points plan. I would love for you to spend a small amount of your precious time to take a look at this:
På forhånd tak.
As we both are aware of, bullying is a huge problem. Therefore I am now writing to you about a possible way of this problem. It is a problem that is raising year after year and that is what we all need to change. Try to think about it, if we all stop the bullying together then we are not going to have depressed, retarded and suppress children or a grown up. Everybody can go to school, kindergarten and work, with out having the feeling of fear to get bullied. I have made a four - points plan. I would love for you to spend a small amount of your precious time to take a look at this:
På forhånd tak.
Svar #1
09. december 2007 af OnlyMe07 (Slettet)
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As we are both aware, bullying is a big problem. Therefore, I am now writing to you an opportunity to have this problem. It is a problem, the year on year increase, and that is what we are all about change. Try to think about when we are all together to the bullying then we are not to have depressed, and suppress retarded children or an adult. Anyone can go to school, kindergarten and work without having the feeling of anxiety to get gemobbt. I have a four points. I would like for you to spend a small amount of your precious time to take a look at this:
Svar #2
09. december 2007 af sukkertrold-xD (Slettet)
tusinde tak.
Men har et spørgsmål, kan ma godt sige to have this problem. ?
Therefore, I am now writing to you about an opportunity to have this problem.
Men har et spørgsmål, kan ma godt sige to have this problem. ?
Therefore, I am now writing to you about an opportunity to have this problem.
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