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Rettelse af resumé. Kun 14 linier.

18. december 2007 af godavdo (Slettet)
Hej. Jeg har virkelig svært ved engelsk, og har ikke nolge som vil rette mit resume for mig.
Derfor håber jeg der er nogle hjælpsomme herinde som lige vil ligge 10 min til at rette denne tekst.
På forhånd mange tak.


I have in this report chosen to write about the Danish wind turbine producer Vestas A/S.
First I have told the history about the company because I think it’s important to know background for the company we know today. After that I have made an analysis of the Vestas with starting from in the subject marketing. In the analysis I begin to explain about each of Vestas interest groups and subsequently do I make a description of Vestas (værdikæde?) with an estimation of every single activity. After this have I described the product life cycle of the wind turbine. The last thing in my analysis is a swot-analysis that describe Vestas internal and

After the analysis I have an evaluation. In my evaluation I start by explaining about the conditions with the choice of a new export market. After that I explain about Vestas position as the leading company in wind energy and how what they can do to preserve and develop this position. In that evaluation I give suggestions to different strategies as growth strategy and competition strategy.

The last part of my report is about Vestas opportunities on the market in the US. Here I explain about the American market for wind turbines together with my ideas to what initiatives that are relevant to when Vestas enter the market.

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Svar #1
18. december 2007 af Dream (Slettet)

Først og fremmest må man ikke bruge "I" i et abstract. Det skal være objektivt.

Du skal have dispositionen:
- Problem statement
- Approach (metode)
- Results
- Conclusions

Jeg ved ikke, hvordan man linker til en anden tråd, men i tråden der hedder "ABSTRACT", er der skrevet en meget god vejledning, den samme som jeg også har fået af min lærer.

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Svar #2
19. december 2007 af simpleplan (Slettet)

Hvordan kan man bruge approach, så det lyder godt. Kan virkelig ikke formulere et sætning med det og så ikke bruge "I". Nogen som har et eksempel?

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