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Abstract- rettelser

20. december 2007 af PigeStudie (Slettet)
Hejsa..

Håber i vil rette min for fejl. Godt nok flyder min kun 9 linier. og der står det skal være på 15-20,men kan simpelthen ikke skrive mere. Håber i har en dié om hva jeg ellers kan skrive..

This paper examines is about plague “The Black Dead”. The problem statement is to find out what the plague cause these infectious diseases, how the middle-aged doctors treat these diseases and how these plagues disappear? The paper also describes and analyzes how the middle Ages people react to these horrible diseases. A case control study is base on books and sources Renaissance is the time science could find out what cause the plague, and could take measures against this plague. The result is that many people dead, the financial circumstances was going down, the medicine and the methods didn’t work, all hope is at an end, but then they found a solution. A name Alexandre Yersin found this Yersinia pestis, is a bacteria that cost many citizens lives. Finally the paper draws a conclusion that the consequences are both positive and negative.

Svar #1
20. december 2007 af PigeStudie (Slettet)

Er der nogen der vil hjælpe?

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Svar #2
21. december 2007 af bathory (Slettet)

Fejl: This paper examines is about plague “The Black Dead”.

Du kan ikke skrive ''examines is''. Det er forkert.

Rettelse: This paper is about...
eller This paper examines a plague “The Black Dead”.

Fejl:is to find out what the plague cause these infectious diseases

Rettelse: why the plague caused..

treat=treated..du skal bruge datid.
dissapear=disappeared
react=reacted

Rettelse: the result was that many people died.The financial circumstances were going down

all hope was at its end

IT is a bacteria that cost many citizens's lives.




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Svar #3
21. december 2007 af bathory (Slettet)

ups citizens'

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