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Patrick helped Marin in to the car and drove her quickly to the hospital.
The doctors must act quickly or else the poison could spread to the whole leg and it would results to an amputation of her leg. Patrick got pale, he was sitting in the waiting room, he looked at the watch it was half past 11, and he wondered if he should contact her parents, maybe they were worried now.
After some while a doctor came and told him that they have removed the poison from her body.
Tom went to see Marin; she was sleeping because of the muffin they gave her.
He sat at the edge of the bed and looked to her beautiful face.
He putted his hand into his pocket and rake out the magnificent ring. Marin was awake; she was watching him very faint and smiled to him. Patrick putted his arms around her and cried, and she whispered in his ear…”Please don’t leave me, I want to stay with you forever, and I’m tired of living a life so strict, we could run away together…”
Patrick kissed her hair and putted the ring on her finger.
He stayed the night with her… and she told him how much she loved him but that she was afraid that some of her family member will know and then shun her.
The next day, Marin had taken the decision, she wants to start a new life…with Patrick, and leave everything behind her, it will be hard, but she thinks that it is this worth.