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nogen der evt. vil kigge.
12. februar 2008 af
ilubabs (Slettet)
hejsa. vil i lige kigge det korte stykke igennem fra starten af min eng stil, rette og komme med kommentar og måske hjælp til at komme vidre!
After an half year in America, were Jess and Jules had played professional football in the professional leagues. They have it very good, but Jess miss Joe very much. She couldn’t find a new guy, just like Joe.
It’s was morning and Jess was fly home in a half year, to visit her family and Joe and made by to get married with Joe, and so take him with to America then her can play professional football again.
After an half year in America, were Jess and Jules had played professional football in the professional leagues. They have it very good, but Jess miss Joe very much. She couldn’t find a new guy, just like Joe.
It’s was morning and Jess was fly home in a half year, to visit her family and Joe and made by to get married with Joe, and so take him with to America then her can play professional football again.
Svar #1
12. februar 2008 af Marie-lp (Slettet)
Kan du skrive på dansk, hvad du ønsker, der skal stå?
Svar #2
14. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)
ja.
efter et halv år i America, hvor jess and jules har spillet fodbold i din professionalee liga. de havde det rigtig godt, men Jess savnede Joe rigtig meget. Hun kunne ikke finde en ny fyr, lige som Joe.
det var morgen og Jess vågnede kl 7 hun skulle med flyet hjem kl 16:00. Hun skulle bo hjemme hos hendes familie i et halvt år. hun skulle besøge gamle venner og være en del sammen med joe og måske giftes med ham. Hvis de bliver gift ville hun tage ham med til America så hun kunne spille Professional fodbold igen.
efter et halv år i America, hvor jess and jules har spillet fodbold i din professionalee liga. de havde det rigtig godt, men Jess savnede Joe rigtig meget. Hun kunne ikke finde en ny fyr, lige som Joe.
det var morgen og Jess vågnede kl 7 hun skulle med flyet hjem kl 16:00. Hun skulle bo hjemme hos hendes familie i et halvt år. hun skulle besøge gamle venner og være en del sammen med joe og måske giftes med ham. Hvis de bliver gift ville hun tage ham med til America så hun kunne spille Professional fodbold igen.
Svar #3
14. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)
After an one year in America, where Jess and Jules had played professional football in the professional leagues. They have it very good and have experiences very much together, but Jess miss Joe very much. She Couldn’t find a new guy just like Joe.
It was morning and Jess was wake up at 7 o’clock, she should with the fly at 15 o’clock. She should live with her family in a half year. She should visit all her old friend and her lover boy Joe. Made by should she get married with him. If they get married Jess will have him with her to America, when she can play football and be happy again.
korrekt?
It was morning and Jess was wake up at 7 o’clock, she should with the fly at 15 o’clock. She should live with her family in a half year. She should visit all her old friend and her lover boy Joe. Made by should she get married with him. If they get married Jess will have him with her to America, when she can play football and be happy again.
korrekt?
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