Side 2 - kort eng, stil nogen som vil rette, - Engelsk

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Svar #21
18. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

#19
At starte =
Jeg starter =
Jeg startede =

De første studenter starter kl 8 = The first students start at 8:00 o’clock - er korrekt

#20
- Breakfast skal ikke med stort B
- we have 5 minuets break : we have a five min....
- At 9:30 we break in a half time : kan man ikke sige, omformulering!
- the third students have start : Stort begyndelsesbogstav. Hvordan staver man til tredje?
- History skal med lille h
- "where we eating" - den har du glemt at rette.
- "and talk with somewhere friends" - somewhere friends?
- "and then we go to physics in two times" - two times?
- "Then at 14:30 we have free." - we are off

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Svar #22
18. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Slå også lige "mine tænder" op.

Svar #23
18. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

Wake up at 7 o’clock at the morning. Then I eat Breakfast, brush my teeth, take clothes on and fix my hair. I Cycle at school with a friend. The first students start at 8 o’clock, and I have History., so we have a little break and the second students start and I have English. At 9:30 we have break in a half time. The bell rings at 10 o’clock and there we go back to our class. The third students start and I have Dutch. We have a little Break again and so the fourth students start and I have history again. Then at 11:30 we have break again, where we eat and talk with our friends. The Bell rings at 12:05 and we go back to our class again. The fifth students start and I have Danish. And again we have a little break and then we go to physics in tow times. Then at 14:30 we have free.

dette er min endlige opgave?
vil du rette den igennem? (:
har selv rette den

jeg har lavet den helt om da jeg ikk kan sige klokken så godt? ..
så vil du kigge her?

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Svar #24
18. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

- Breakfast skal ikke med stort B - IKKE RETTET
- At 9:30 we break in a half time : kan man ikke sige, omformulering! IKKE RETTET
- the third students have start : Stort begyndelsesbogstav. Hvordan staver man til tredje? DELVIST RETTET
- History skal med lille h - IKKE RETTET
- "and then we go to physics in two times" - two times? IKKE RETTET
- "Then at 14:30 we have free." - we are off IKKE RETTET

Nye punkter i forhold til #23:
- "I Cycle at school with a friend" - hvorfor skriver du cycle med stort C? At school= to school
- "We have a little Break" - hvorfor skriver break med stort B? Hvor er den engelskregel henne at man skal skrive nogle ord med stort? Gælder også Bell...

Svar #25
18. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

okay jeg prøver igen.

hvad mener du med?
- "and then we go to physics in two times" - two times? IKKE RETTET
- "Then at 14:30 we have free." - we are off IKKE RETTET

Svar #26
18. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

At 9:30 we break in a half time : kan man ikke sige, omformulering! IKKE RETTET

hvordan vil du skrive den om jeg er nemlig lost? ..

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Svar #27
18. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

- "and then we go to physics in two times" - two times? IKKE RETTET
Hvad mener du med "two times"?

- "Then at 14:30 we have free." - we are off IKKE RETTET
We are off.. ikke we have free.

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Svar #28
18. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

#26 jeg er sørma også lost, hvad vil du sige?

Svar #29
18. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

I Wake up at 7 o’clock at the morning. Then I eat breakfast, brush my teeth, take clothes on and fix my hair. I cycle at school with a friend. The first students start at 8 o’clock, and I have history., so we have a little break and the second students start and I have English. At 9:30 we have break in a half time. The bell rings at 10 o’clock and there we go back to our class. The third students start and I have Dutch. We have a little Break again and so the fourth students start and I have history again. Then at 11:30 we have break again, where we eat and talk with our friends. The bell rings at 12:05 and we go back to our class again. The fifth students start and I have Danish. And again we have a little break and then we go to physics in tow times. Then at 14:30 we have free.

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Svar #30
18. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Tjek min liste igennem for rettelser, før du poster en ny halvrettet version, ellers bliver det for uoverskueligt at hjælpe dig.

Svar #31
18. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

hehe jeg vil skrive:

- og så går vi til fysik i to timer og så kl 14:30 har we fri.

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Svar #32
18. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Hvorfor i himlens navn er wake nu med stort W????? Hvad sker der for dig?

Svar #33
18. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

okay men der er noget jeg ikk helt forstår ved dine rettelseer?

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Svar #34
18. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

Ret igennem.. helt igennem og kom så ind på banen igen.

Svar #35
18. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

DETTE her skal ikk afleverer jeg skal læser det op! men er ordene rigige ?

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Svar #36
18. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

#34 eller også stopper vi her.

Svar #37
18. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

I wake up at 7 o’clock at the morning. Then I eat breakfast, brush my teeth, take clothes on and fix my hair. I cycle at school with a friend. The first students start at 8 o’clock, and I have history., so we have a little break and the second students start and I have English. At 9:30 have we break in a half time. The bell rings at 10 o’clock and there we go back to our class. The third students start and I have Dutch. We have a little break again and so the fourth students start and I have history again. Then at 11:30 we have break again, where we eat and talk with our friends. The bell rings at 12:05 and we go back to our class again. The fifth students start and I have Danish. And again we have a little break and then we go to physics in tow times. Then at 14:30 we have free.

Svar #38
18. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

nu mener jeg at jeg har rette den .
jeg er træt og kan snart ikk mere ?

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Svar #39
18. februar 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)

- At 9:30 we break in a half time : kan man ikke sige, omformulering! IKKE RETTET
- the third students have start : Hvordan staver man til tredje? DELVIST RETTET
- "and then we go to physics in two times" - two times? Hvad hedder en time på uret? Hvad hedder så to timer? IKKE RETTET
- "Then at 14:30 we have free." - we are off IKKE RETTET

Nye punkter i forhold til #23:
- "I Cycle at school with a friend" - At school= to school IKKE RETTET

Du mangler altså fortsat at rette nogle punkter. Det burde du kunne klare selv.

TanteOda

Svar #40
19. februar 2008 af ilubabs (Slettet)

det kan jeg ikk :'(