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Rettelse af kort stil til i morgen
19. februar 2008 af
KA91 (Slettet)
Hej jeg har en lille stil for til i morgen som. Det kunne være nice hvis der var en der gad at gå igennem og se om der skulle være nogle fejl. Tak på forhånd:P.
Is obesity your own responsibility?
In all countries around the world people suffer from obesity. In America we have the biggest number of obesity problems and many of these people believe that it’s not their own responsibility that they are overweight. We have seen the movie ‘’supersize me’’ where concerns like Mc Donald’s gets the blame for peoples obesity, but which responsibility is it really?
Many kinds of food have a high percent of fat today. Fast food is one of these and has gone to be very popular kind of food and is also very cheap. A lot of people don’t have that much money and has to spare as many money as they can to pay their bills. Fast-food is therefore a very easy way to get the daily nourishment that we all need. But it’s still themselves who decides what they put in their mouth. No one controls anybody I just think it’s about bad habits. Lots of men and woman loves the taste of Mac Donald’s and this is for some people hard to let go. When it gets normal to buy 2 burgers a week it will increase to maybe 3 burgers a week and so on. But I still think it’s a bad habit which you can work out if you really don’t want it, and about the money then fast food isn’t the only thing which is cheap spaghetti is also an optional thing.
Is obesity your own responsibility?
In all countries around the world people suffer from obesity. In America we have the biggest number of obesity problems and many of these people believe that it’s not their own responsibility that they are overweight. We have seen the movie ‘’supersize me’’ where concerns like Mc Donald’s gets the blame for peoples obesity, but which responsibility is it really?
Many kinds of food have a high percent of fat today. Fast food is one of these and has gone to be very popular kind of food and is also very cheap. A lot of people don’t have that much money and has to spare as many money as they can to pay their bills. Fast-food is therefore a very easy way to get the daily nourishment that we all need. But it’s still themselves who decides what they put in their mouth. No one controls anybody I just think it’s about bad habits. Lots of men and woman loves the taste of Mac Donald’s and this is for some people hard to let go. When it gets normal to buy 2 burgers a week it will increase to maybe 3 burgers a week and so on. But I still think it’s a bad habit which you can work out if you really don’t want it, and about the money then fast food isn’t the only thing which is cheap spaghetti is also an optional thing.
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20. februar 2008 af OnlyMe07 (Slettet)
Is obesity your own responsibility?
In all countries around the world people suffering from obesity. In America we have the largest number of obesity problems and many of these people are of the opinion that it was not their responsibility that they are overweight. We have seen how the film''supersize me''waar explained Mc Donald's gets the blame for the nations obesity, but that responsibility is it?
Many types of food have a high percentage of fat today. Fast Food is one of these and has been very popular type of food and is also very cheap. A lot of people do not have as much money to save and has so much money as they can pay their bills. Fast-food is a very easy way to the daily diet that we all need. But it is still himself who decides what they have in their mouth. Nobody controls someone I think only about the bad habits. Many men and women loves the taste of Mac Donald's, and that is difficult for some to let go. When it is normal to buy hamburgers 2 per week will increase to perhaps 3 hamburgers a week, and so on. But I still think it's a bad habit that you can work if you really do not want it, and the money then fast food is not the only thing cheap spaghetti is also an optional thing.
In all countries around the world people suffering from obesity. In America we have the largest number of obesity problems and many of these people are of the opinion that it was not their responsibility that they are overweight. We have seen how the film''supersize me''waar explained Mc Donald's gets the blame for the nations obesity, but that responsibility is it?
Many types of food have a high percentage of fat today. Fast Food is one of these and has been very popular type of food and is also very cheap. A lot of people do not have as much money to save and has so much money as they can pay their bills. Fast-food is a very easy way to the daily diet that we all need. But it is still himself who decides what they have in their mouth. Nobody controls someone I think only about the bad habits. Many men and women loves the taste of Mac Donald's, and that is difficult for some to let go. When it is normal to buy hamburgers 2 per week will increase to perhaps 3 hamburgers a week, and so on. But I still think it's a bad habit that you can work if you really do not want it, and the money then fast food is not the only thing cheap spaghetti is also an optional thing.
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