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Hjælp til grammatisk rettelse
30. marts 2008 af
Eagle-Eye (Slettet)
Jeg arbejder for tiden med lidt engelsk grammatik, og skal i den forbindelse skrive nogle stile. Derfor kunne jeg godt tænke mig at vide, om der i nedenstående tekst, skulle befinde sig nogle grammatiske bøffer? - Hvis det er tilfældet, må Du meget gerne give mig et hint.
På forhånd mange tak!
Imagine a being, maybe a human being with rabbit ears or with an udder instead of ordinary breasts, wouldn’t that be strange? I personally think it will. I don’t think - if such a being is ever going to be born – that it will be able to live an ordinary life among stereotypes as the normal human being. I simply don’t think it will be accepted in the society, it would be too strange. Cloning animals with humans, is for me the same as going that one step further, the step many people are afraid of.
I’m not sure whether Ms. Antonia Windsor is talking about cloning or she is referring to stem cell engineering, but there’s a big ethical difference between those two acts. I think that stem cell engineering, when designed to correct physical defects in unborn children is acceptable, but when we come to the aspect of cloning, I think we’re going to meet a big ethical wall.
Hilsen,
JKJ
På forhånd mange tak!
Imagine a being, maybe a human being with rabbit ears or with an udder instead of ordinary breasts, wouldn’t that be strange? I personally think it will. I don’t think - if such a being is ever going to be born – that it will be able to live an ordinary life among stereotypes as the normal human being. I simply don’t think it will be accepted in the society, it would be too strange. Cloning animals with humans, is for me the same as going that one step further, the step many people are afraid of.
I’m not sure whether Ms. Antonia Windsor is talking about cloning or she is referring to stem cell engineering, but there’s a big ethical difference between those two acts. I think that stem cell engineering, when designed to correct physical defects in unborn children is acceptable, but when we come to the aspect of cloning, I think we’re going to meet a big ethical wall.
Hilsen,
JKJ
Svar #1
30. marts 2008 af tyra16 (Slettet)
soory i change a bit. i don't know nor you mean clothing or cloning, but you can change it in that line.
hope this could help you!!!
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imagine a human being, maybe human beings) with rabbit ears or with an udder instead of the ordinary breasts, wouldn’t that be strange!?
I personally think it's strange). I don’t think (that),if such a human couldn't have been born. – that they )would) be able to live an ordinary life among stereotypes as )normal human beings). I simply don’t think that) it (could) be accepted in (our societies), it would be too strange.
(clothing like animals) is for me the same as going to)one step further, (than)the step many people are afraid of.
I’m not sure whether Ms. Antonia Windsor is talking about cloning or she is referring to stem cell engineering, but there’s a big ethical difference between those two acts. I think that stem cell engineering, when designed to correct physical defects in unborn children (are) acceptable, but when we come to the aspect of cloning, I think we’re going to meet a big ethical wall.
Svar #2
30. marts 2008 af Eagle-Eye (Slettet)
Hej,
Det er naturligvis "cloning" og ikke "clothing" der bruges i afsnittet.
Desuden skal man passe på, at stoffet ikke ryger uden for kontekst - en kontekst med udgangspunkt i en tekst jeg har modtaget, som Du naturligvis ikke har belæg for at kunne vide om :). Men mange tak for de grammatiske rettelser :).
JKJ
Det er naturligvis "cloning" og ikke "clothing" der bruges i afsnittet.
Desuden skal man passe på, at stoffet ikke ryger uden for kontekst - en kontekst med udgangspunkt i en tekst jeg har modtaget, som Du naturligvis ikke har belæg for at kunne vide om :). Men mange tak for de grammatiske rettelser :).
JKJ
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