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rettelse..!?
31. marts 2008 af
cool2000000 (Slettet)
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Following history is told about the famous painter. One day, as he sat on a restaurant and enjoyed his dinner, a gentleman and a lady came in and took place by the table just opposite him. The lady was very talkative, and when she talked very loud, he couldn't avoid hearing nearly every to hear nearly every thing, that she said, even though that it not was habits to hear other peoples conversation. They had evidently visit a picture exhibition and her foolish remark about, what she had seen annoyed him a great deal. After that she began to criticise them, their sat by the other tables, and when she finite sank the voice to a whispering and both she and the gentleman on the same time saw at him, he understood that now he was object for theirs conversation. He took quietly his sketch book out of the pocket and began to draw in it, as he sometimes troughed a flash over on the lady. After a little while the gentleman stand up, and walked over to him and said angrily. "My gentleman I forbid you to draw my wife, I wouldn't have that you shall go around with hers portrait in the pocket". To the answer the painter passed his book and said in an innocent sound. "Is that yours wife portrait." He had drawn a goose.
mvh.
mads
Following history is told about the famous painter. One day, as he sat on a restaurant and enjoyed his dinner, a gentleman and a lady came in and took place by the table just opposite him. The lady was very talkative, and when she talked very loud, he couldn't avoid hearing nearly every to hear nearly every thing, that she said, even though that it not was habits to hear other peoples conversation. They had evidently visit a picture exhibition and her foolish remark about, what she had seen annoyed him a great deal. After that she began to criticise them, their sat by the other tables, and when she finite sank the voice to a whispering and both she and the gentleman on the same time saw at him, he understood that now he was object for theirs conversation. He took quietly his sketch book out of the pocket and began to draw in it, as he sometimes troughed a flash over on the lady. After a little while the gentleman stand up, and walked over to him and said angrily. "My gentleman I forbid you to draw my wife, I wouldn't have that you shall go around with hers portrait in the pocket". To the answer the painter passed his book and said in an innocent sound. "Is that yours wife portrait." He had drawn a goose.
mvh.
mads
Svar #1
31. marts 2008 af bullerfnuller11 (Slettet)
hey.
har nogle kommentarer:
"hearing nearly every to hear nearly every thing" - slet gentagne ord
", that she said," - aldrig komma foran that
"even though that it not was habits to hear other peoples conversation." - denne sætning er lidt kludret og fordansket, kan du ikke omformulere? tror også der mangler et "he" evt...
"After that she" aldrig præp. før that
"their sat by " - skal their ikke være they?
"theirs conversation." - det skal være their - udelad -s!
"My gentleman I forbid you to draw my wife, I wouldn't have that you shall" - det er fordansket, omformulér...'
". "Is that yours wife portrait" - der skal stå your, ikke yours...
Håber du kan bruge nogle af mine rettelser og vil bære over med mig, hvis det ikke er helt korrekt - man er vel ikke ekspert.
Vh
Anne-Sofie
har nogle kommentarer:
"hearing nearly every to hear nearly every thing" - slet gentagne ord
", that she said," - aldrig komma foran that
"even though that it not was habits to hear other peoples conversation." - denne sætning er lidt kludret og fordansket, kan du ikke omformulere? tror også der mangler et "he" evt...
"After that she" aldrig præp. før that
"their sat by " - skal their ikke være they?
"theirs conversation." - det skal være their - udelad -s!
"My gentleman I forbid you to draw my wife, I wouldn't have that you shall" - det er fordansket, omformulér...'
". "Is that yours wife portrait" - der skal stå your, ikke yours...
Håber du kan bruge nogle af mine rettelser og vil bære over med mig, hvis det ikke er helt korrekt - man er vel ikke ekspert.
Vh
Anne-Sofie
Svar #2
31. marts 2008 af cool2000000 (Slettet)
tusinde tak Anne-Sofie..
jeg ville gøre alt, for dig, tjenester osv. hvis du har brug for hjælp-
hvis du gider at skriv ,en rettet version til mig..
tusind tak.
mvh.
Mads
jeg ville gøre alt, for dig, tjenester osv. hvis du har brug for hjælp-
hvis du gider at skriv ,en rettet version til mig..
tusind tak.
mvh.
Mads
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