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25. april 2008 af Ayazaman (Slettet)
Hej venner!

Nogen som kan hjælpe med en rettelse af min MEGET vigtige e-mail?
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Hello office of admissions!

My name is Andreas, i'm 19 years old. I'm from Denmark, Copenhagen and i got Danish citizenry. I'm very much interested in heart surgery. I wrote a big assignment/report about it in my secondary school, which the teachers really appreciated.

I'm searching for some kind of information about the medical institute. It's quite different from the colleges and universities here. What I want to know is, that here in Denmark its a must to send the college diploma with your grade average in it, to the place you want an admission in. How is the system overthere? If I come from Denmark to the Medical Institute in Virginia, what will the needs or requirements be? I read about the fee, how about the place or hostel? When you get a person like me, from another country, in your institute do you then give those people a "start test/examination"?

More information about me:

Its my last year in college, 3. year student in Gladsaxe Gymnasium (Denmark)

Subjects: Physics B, Mathematics A, Chemistry B, English A, Biology B, Danish A, History A.

I would be very happy with a brief and specific detailed information e-mail about the institute requirements for foreign students like me.
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Håber i kan hjælpe :)

Svar #1
25. april 2008 af Ayazaman (Slettet)

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Svar #2
25. april 2008 af Peden (Slettet)

Ingen udråbstegn for det første. Heller ikke noget talesprog eller sammentrækninger - I'm eksempelvis.

Du kan heller ikke regne med at de ved hvad A og C står for, er det dine karatkerer i fagene?

"place or hostel?" Mener du accomodation?

Ellers skal du ikke tage det _så_ tungt, du skriver jo en uformel email og ikke en konkret ansøgning. Se hvad de siger og forhold dig så til det.

Men hvorfor vil du søge ind i USA i stedet for DK?


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Svar #3
25. april 2008 af Mussy06 (Slettet)

Hedder det virkelig with a brief? (brief er da tysk)
Brev er det ikke letter?


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Svar #4
25. april 2008 af Peden (Slettet)

"i got Danish citizenry" -> I am a Danish citizen, eller I have Danish citizenry

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Svar #5
25. april 2008 af Peden (Slettet)

#3:
Brief er korrekt fordi det her henfører til email, altså en kort email.

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Svar #6
25. april 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

#3.
brief = kortfattet (så det er fint nok)

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Svar #7
25. april 2008 af Mussy06 (Slettet)

Så blev jeg da klogere (:

Svar #8
25. april 2008 af Ayazaman (Slettet)

Ok. til #2

Jeg søger i USA fordi jeg er bedre tilpas med Engelsk end dansk. Men jeg skriver mailen og vil se svaret.. men har også søgt i DK. Dont worry :)

Svar #9
25. april 2008 af Ayazaman (Slettet)

Rettelse:

Hello, office of admissions.

My name is Andreas, i'm 19 years old. I'm from Denmark, Copenhagen and i got Danish citizenry. I'm very much interested in heart surgery. I wrote a big assignment/report about it in my secondary school, which the teachers really appreciated.

I'm searching for some kind of information about the medical institute. It's quite different from the colleges and universities here. What I want to know is, that here in Denmark it’s a must to send the college diploma with your grade average in it, to the place you want an admission in. How is the system over there? If I come from Denmark to the Medical Institute in Virginia, what are the needs or requirements? I read about the fee, how about the accommodation? When you get a person like me, from another country, in your institute do you then give those people a "start test/examination"?

More information about me:

Its my last year in college, 3. year student in Gladsaxe Gymnasium (Denmark)

Subjects: Physics B, Mathematics A, Chemistry B, English A, Biology B, Danish A, History A.
(The alphabets (A;B;C) are the level I have my subjects in).

I would be very happy with a brief and specific detailed information e-mail about the institute requirements for foreign students like me.

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Svar #10
25. april 2008 af Peden (Slettet)

Igen, drop "I'm" "it's" og "I got" det sidste er afgjort Rap-Engelsk og med mindre man hedder Fiddy er det ikke god stil.

"Its my last year in college" -> "I am in my last year in college"

Hvad med at fortælle dem din forventede GPA?

Svar #11
25. april 2008 af Ayazaman (Slettet)

any comments on the correction?

Svar #12
25. april 2008 af Ayazaman (Slettet)

GPA?

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Svar #13
25. april 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Mit umiddelbare bud, men jeg har desværre ikke haft engelsk A ;).

Dear Office of Admissions.

My name is Andreas and I am nineteen years old. I live in Copenhagen, Denmark, and I am a Danish citizen. I am very interested in heart surgery. In my secondary school, I have written a major assignment on this topic, appreciated by my teachers.

I am searching for any kind of information about the medical institute. It seems to be rather different from universities in my country. In Denmark, it is essential to send your college diploma along with your grade card to the place of admission; hence I would like to know how the system is in the US? If I apply for the medical institute in Virginia, what are the requirements? I have read about the fee, but how about accommodation? When you admit a person like me, from another country, do you give those people an entrance examination?

More information about me:

It is my last year in college, 3rd year student at Gladsaxe Gymnasium (Denmark).

Subjects: Physics B, Mathematics A, Chemistry B, English A, Biology B, Danish A, History A.
(The letters (A;B;C) are the level of my subjects).

I would be pleased with a brief and detailed e-mail about the requirements of the institute for foreign students like me.

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Svar #14
25. april 2008 af Peden (Slettet)

#12:
Grade point average: Gennemsnit


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Svar #15
25. april 2008 af Peden (Slettet)

I øvrigt: Er det almindeligt brugt at man kalder gymnasiet for college?

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