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Rette tekst om børnearbejde
04. juni 2008 af
bloodyhell (Slettet)
Hej
Er der en eller flere engelsk kyndige mennesker, som gider rette nedenstående tekst? Jeg vil være enorm taknemlig!
The children get used at work because they are cheap laborer and they are easy to exploit.
The mainly reason of child labor is poverty. The only way to survive is to work even the children have to work. And for the children there are no options for school either because of it cost a lot of money or because the child must help its parents with working. Many parents have to send their children out for work because as a child u can easy get a work. It’s because a lot of people want children as laborer because they are small and as mentioned before its easy to exploits them, especially the carpet weavers want children because they have small fingers. A lot of the children get a very bad wage or don’t even get anything, because they get cheat. They could get told that they have to work free for one month to learn the work and then will get paid, but many times they actually after working free for one month they get sacked.
Each countries government should focus more about the problem. They could have school duty in 9 years like in Denmark, and then the child has at least learned something and a better chance to do with. And these 9 years should be free so the poor also can get a chance to go to school. And I think if a lot of the countries had a welfare state it will help a lot and prevent child labor. But of course there will always be poverty and with that child labor.
Er der en eller flere engelsk kyndige mennesker, som gider rette nedenstående tekst? Jeg vil være enorm taknemlig!
The children get used at work because they are cheap laborer and they are easy to exploit.
The mainly reason of child labor is poverty. The only way to survive is to work even the children have to work. And for the children there are no options for school either because of it cost a lot of money or because the child must help its parents with working. Many parents have to send their children out for work because as a child u can easy get a work. It’s because a lot of people want children as laborer because they are small and as mentioned before its easy to exploits them, especially the carpet weavers want children because they have small fingers. A lot of the children get a very bad wage or don’t even get anything, because they get cheat. They could get told that they have to work free for one month to learn the work and then will get paid, but many times they actually after working free for one month they get sacked.
Each countries government should focus more about the problem. They could have school duty in 9 years like in Denmark, and then the child has at least learned something and a better chance to do with. And these 9 years should be free so the poor also can get a chance to go to school. And I think if a lot of the countries had a welfare state it will help a lot and prevent child labor. But of course there will always be poverty and with that child labor.
Svar #2
04. juni 2008 af Mariecph (Slettet)
er det en del af eksamens oplæg???
Du skal huske at skrive ordene helt ud og ikke forkorte dem!
Fx. u - you
Ellers kan jeg ikke se nogle fejl?
Du skal huske at skrive ordene helt ud og ikke forkorte dem!
Fx. u - you
Ellers kan jeg ikke se nogle fejl?
Svar #3
05. juni 2008 af zgtaf (Slettet)
The mainly reason -> The main reason.
The only way to survive is to work even the children have to work. -> The only way to survive is to work. Even the children have to work.
...school either because of it cost a lot of money -> ...school either because it costs a lot of money.
Many parents have to send their children out for work because as a child u can easy get a work. -> Many parents have to send their children out to work, because as a child you can easily get a job.
Bare et par af fejlene jeg umiddelbart kunne skimme :) Ser ud som om, der er en del mere, men havde ikke rigtig mere tid xD
The only way to survive is to work even the children have to work. -> The only way to survive is to work. Even the children have to work.
...school either because of it cost a lot of money -> ...school either because it costs a lot of money.
Many parents have to send their children out for work because as a child u can easy get a work. -> Many parents have to send their children out to work, because as a child you can easily get a job.
Bare et par af fejlene jeg umiddelbart kunne skimme :) Ser ud som om, der er en del mere, men havde ikke rigtig mere tid xD
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