rettelse....

Hej,., j ska op til mundtlig engelsk B niveu eksam imorgen og har skrevet et par sætninger ned.. så jeg kan fremlægge det imorgen, men jeg er ikke sikker på at de sætninger er gramatisk korrekt...så hvis i vil hjælp mig med at rette de sætninger eller evt tilføjnogle sætninger... vil der være perfekt....
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Peter Goldsworthy is an Australian writer and medical practitioner . He has won awards for his short stories, poetry and novels.

One of his famous short stories is One of My Best Friends witch he wrote in 1994.
One of My best friends is Fiction and is written in a 1 person narrator. The whole story is set around narrator; we see through his eyes and “read” his thoughts.


The main Character is the narrator, we don’t know his Name.
He is son of a Police officer and later become a Police officer himself and he is married and he is about 30 years old.
The main Character is physically strong and knows how to defend him self. Maybe is because he is son of a cop. But in his childhood, he knows how to defend him self from the other kid at school for example.
The main Character is a little bit Emotional and it shows when he can’t break away from Willy and feels sorry for him.

Willy is another character in the story.
Willy is mulatto, half Australian and half Aborigine.
Willy’s appearance and the way he looks are different from the other kid in neighbourhood. He has a flat nose, big, thick eyebrow and he is very thin.
Willy is very lonely guy and hasn’t so much contact with other human, he perceives as a Victim and always get bullies from the other kids.
Willy plays football for an Abo Team and their team act and plays very aggressive and violent, so the league doesn’t really wants them.


Willy live in a foster home were he has been teased and beated.
His environment is so bad that he always want to run away from home. He will rather be with the Main characters home than his own home.


The text take place In Australia in the country and a small town, and a society with lot of discrimination. The text could take place today or 40-50 years ago.

The Themes are Clash of culture, Australia, and Racism.
I say clash of culture and Australia because these two themes have connection to each other.
When in late 1700 Europeans arrived and colonize Australia. It became aboriginal’s nightmare.
The British who were arrived too missionary, took the aborigines child away from their parents in hope for that they will get lighter skin and develop to what they call a civilize human, like them in coming generation.
In that time, the child who was forced to leave in the foster homes leaved in the worse environment, just like Willy, they became a slave.
In the result of this Today Aborigines suffer mental disorders and metal illness. Most of them are with out a job and lots of them have drinking problem.
I think the text wants to tell us that its time to move on, and take responsibility. The Australian needs to accept their Genocide and massacre against the aborigines, and aborigines have to move on.