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Rettelse af abstract..

15. december 2008 af Olviro (Slettet)

Hej derude er ikke så god til engelsk, og det er her the første indtryk af opgaven gives, så derfor skal dette stykke helst ikke have for mange fejl.. Så derfor er der nogen der gider rette det her igennem ?

Abstract:
This paper explores the plague in Denmark in the year of 1600, this plague took many people’s life in 1654. The paper have made two mathematic model over the progress of sick people and the people there recover after having this plague, bye looking on how many people a sick man meet, how big the chance of contagion is and how big the chance to get wealthy after having the plague is, the paper found out that the progress of sick people is very big and very few people got wealthy again only 10%. The paper calculates how many people there died in percentages in the city and in the country side, by looking at the population and the burials, on this place. The plague killed 28 % of Copenhagen, and in the countryside did 12,8 % died. The paper do also have a comparison between the plague, in Aalborg in 1602 and in 1654 Copenhagen, it found out that there were many similarities between those 2 outbreak’s, in both outbreaks died approx a quarter of the citizens, and the biggest difference where people’s way to react on this disease, because in Aalborg in 1602 did people still go to the markets under the disease, even though the farosot had tell them not to, in Copenhagen did the king closed those markets and the people respect it and the markets were shut down. The paper concluded that the terms for an epidemic were there, when the progress of sick people where bigger than the progresses of the people there got wealthy after having the plague. The reason to so many people died, is because the doctors couldn’t do anything to this plague and the people’s hygiene where, very bad. More people could have died if the king didn’t have closed the markets and they haven’t made a legislation about how you shout act when there where plague.
 


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15. december 2008 af Jean

Tip 1. Husk at sætte punktummer. 

Der er mange fejl. Er det virkelig dit bedste bud?


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