rette haster aflever imrogen

Jeg vil ikke skrive 'the paper tells", det er en dårlig direkte oversættelse, jeg vil hellere skrive "the paper states" eller lignende. 'there miserably conditions" burde være "their miserably conditions. 'the memory is remaining...' vil jeg udskifte med " the memory remains but the furture looks better..."

"the study are buliding from books..." hmm, det kan man ikke rigtig sige, jeg vil skrive 'the study is based on (det behøver ikke altid at være en direkte oversættelse, hvis denne bliver dårlig er det tilladt at 'forsmukke' sætningen)

Håber du kan bruge det

her er mit forslag, sammenlign lige selv med din egen, mine understregninger kom ikke med

The history of the Kurds has for a long time been influenced of the war and suppression from the different countries where the Kurds have been living. This study seeks to describe the development of the Kurds until today, concerning the Iraqi Kurds. The paper tells shortly about the four countries where the Kurds are living and there miserably conditions. Since the fall of Saddam Hussein the condition of the Kurds has been more safe and they are making a fresh start. The memory remains but the future looks better than was the case five years ago. The Kurds are very thankful to the USA because they brought down Saddam Hussein´s dictatorship and they have begun to build up a democracy. The study are borrowed from books, news papers, internet, but also from my own father and his family, who still live in the northern part of Iraq.