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09. januar 2009 af Turtle (Slettet)

Jeg har oversat en kort tekst. Er i ikke søde at læse den igennem og evt fortælle mig store fejl? (ved godt jeg er idiot til engelsk :( )

In the 1970s an American doctor discovered that you could help ill people with laughter. At that time, many people thought that it was nonsense, but today hospital clowns is approved as a remedy to recovery, especially at the childrenwards.
Even though the clowns are popular and the children are pleased to meet them, it’s not all hospitals which are visited by the clowns. The clowns are still not on the budgets of the hospitals, and therefore they are dependent of support from sponsors and foundations.
 


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09. januar 2009 af Youngmann (Slettet)

In the 1970s an American doctor discovered, that you could help ill people with laughters. At that time, many people thought, that it was nonsense, but today the clowns of the hospitals are approved as a remedy to the recovery, especially at the wards of children.
Even though the clowns are popular and the children are pleased to meet them, it’s not all hospitals which have clowns. The clowns are still not on the budgets of the hospitals, and therefore they are dependent on support from sponsors and foundations.


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09. januar 2009 af Turtle (Slettet)

Hehe tusind tak... Igen :)

Nu mangler jeg heldigvis kun én opgave, men den er om stilistiske hjælpemidler og synes ikke rigtigt der er nogen, så den tager jeg med min lærer i morgen :D


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Svar #3
09. januar 2009 af danielruhmann (Slettet)

#1

Husk, at kommaet ikke sættes efter et grammatisk system på engelsk. Ikke komma foran fx that (at, som).


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