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A résumé of Philip Prowse’s ‘Bristol murder’
 

The lorry driver Peter Jones was on his way to Manchester with a load of biscuits, when he saw a boy about sixteen hitch-hiking. The boy ran over to Peter’s lorry and asked where Peter was going, and if he could give him a lift. Peter helped the boy into the lorry and then they drove off.
The boys name was John Stevens, and he had run away from home, because he had had an argument with his uncle. John lived with his uncle because both his parents are dead.
Later when John and Peter hold a break from the driving, Peter saw in the newspaper that the police was looking for John, because his uncle was founded dead the night before. After they have being stopped by the police Peter must hear John if he had killed his uncle, but John didn’t even know he was dead and they now start the search for John’s uncle’s murderer.
 

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