hurtigt-- Abstract - gode ideer?

Hej alle.

Jeg skal aflevere min studieretningsopgave i morgen, og jeg vil meget gerne hvis nogen af jer derude kunne hjælpe mig til at gøre mit abstract bedre:

" The study investigates the major rise of temperature and the consequences of the phenomenon global warming. This paper analyses extracts of the roman “The Day after Tomorrow” by Whitley Strieber, with particular focus on characterization of the characters and the theme, whereupon the study will explore the visual aids from the film version. The paper discusses the phenomenon known as the greenhouse effect, coherent with the thermohaline circulation and finally it supplies data of tornadoes. These phenomenons are estimated from the film version point of view and its reality. Finally the paper discusses how fiction can be used for the prevalence of research results. The themes in the roman are solidarity between every kind of humans and it finally say that the humanity must react on the consequences of global warming instant. It is shown that the film is a strongly exaggeration, whereby there is a significant relationship between overdoing a film and making people realize what could happen with the nature, and the fact that nothing of its problems are true, except it still shocks people when they watch the film. The results summarize that fiction can be used to enlarge new research results. "

Det vil hjælpe rigtig meget, hvis nogen kunne sige hvad jeg mangler og hvad der er godt, eventuelt.