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Engelsk stil ! hjælp til rettelse! :D

29. januar 2009 af lenepigen92 (Slettet)

Jeg har skrevet en stil.
Jeg skulle skive et brev til "lizzie" om mine interesser..
Dette er hermed gjort..
Men jeg er forfærdelig dårlig til engelsk.
så håbede lidt på om ikke der var nogen som er gode til engelsk , og som er så fantastie at de vil
 rette den for mig! :)
Den er kun 1 side..
Jeg håber på  jeres hjælp  ! :)
På forhånd tak
Lene

Vedhæftet fil: Dear Lizzie.doc

Svar #1
29. januar 2009 af lenepigen92 (Slettet)

Fantastiske*


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Svar #2
29. januar 2009 af kirmizi (Slettet)


Kopir det og sæt det ind i en mappe først + kig på stavefejl, havde ikke en ordbog i nærheden og tror der er stavelsesfejl .
Dear Lizzie.

Dear Lizzie.
Now you just hear about my interests.
Sport means a lot to me.I danced when I was little for (a)?few years, but I did not conteniue( fortsætte- måske r dt ikke rigtig stavet) because it took a lot of my time.
I began here 2 years ago to go into fitness center with some friends, and I am actually having a lot of fun.
One has trained no matter what the weather it is?
and I am with my friends who I love very much.
I go there with my friends about 3 times a week. It depends on what we need.
There is a fitness center really close to my home, but more important than that, there is a lot of activities and it is not only one activity you can do. You can almost do everything, from running to cycling etc.
It is a lot more fun, when I am training with my friends and I also train more and actually harder, because they are doing the area a lot more fun to me.
It can be a little annoying to train always inside, because of the weather is not good, but when it is do I often take a walk with my friends and enjoying the weather.
I really want to start to dance again, because dansing did not only help on my look, but it also helped me in believing myself.
When I was a little girl, did I win so many tournamates, and that was a big step to building my confindence.
I miss dancing, although I now go to gym with my friends, but I still do not feel that is a sport, I feel that is more a hobby to go to gym, than actually training.
After high-school I will start to college and I belive that I wont have so much time for anything else than doing my homework.
But I belive that sometimes it is hard to have to things you like very badly at the same time, som you have to sacrifice.
However, I really like the fitness center and the best part about a fitness center is that I can go whenever I want to, wicth means that the time or how often i workout in the gym does not really matter. It is all up to me.
That is one of the reasons for I choose a fitness center to train in and another reason is that I belive that a person should have fun with the things he or she does and of course are we all training to be healthy and fit, beacuse it is not always fun to work for something actually, especially not working for have a better look. But my friend are doing it so much fun for me,that I do not think about getting sveaty og tired at all, I am just having fun. But it is of course not always we are training together, because somethimes I or my friends have other plans. But
it is only sometimes, not always!
.....
Love from
 


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Svar #3
28. november 2009 af tanipani (Slettet)

hej min veninde har lige fået den for og hun vil kopiere det brev som i har skrevet, så vil i ikke være søde og slette det, for jeg vil have at hun selv skal lave det. Tak :)


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Svar #4
28. november 2009 af tanipani (Slettet)

og det må dt slettes hurtigt, please,  enten samtalen eller brevet.

HURTIGT,TAK


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Svar #5
28. november 2009 af tanipani (Slettet)

please  tak


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