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rettelse af en english short story
19. november 2004 af
star7 (Slettet)
I was walking in the streets of paris...
I actually didn't really know where I was going, but somewhere. And then something really important happenend. I felt like it was meant to be, i felt that she was my true love. Honestly, i didn't just love her from the first time i saw her. At the first tme i saw her, i only felt impressed by the way she looked - she was the beaufulest girl I had ever seen. Second time we met, i learned that she wasn't just a good-looking girl, no she also had a wonderful personality. But I knew that, what I was doing was wrong. I knew, that it was wrong for me to love her. The difference between me and her was really huge, and when i say huge, i really mean it. She was a wealthy student, having a project about homeless people. And I - I was one of those dirty, poor homeless people. But when you really love - when it's true love - you just can't stop loving "ur true love"...
HÅBER NOGEN VIL RETTE! THANKS IN ADVANCE!
I actually didn't really know where I was going, but somewhere. And then something really important happenend. I felt like it was meant to be, i felt that she was my true love. Honestly, i didn't just love her from the first time i saw her. At the first tme i saw her, i only felt impressed by the way she looked - she was the beaufulest girl I had ever seen. Second time we met, i learned that she wasn't just a good-looking girl, no she also had a wonderful personality. But I knew that, what I was doing was wrong. I knew, that it was wrong for me to love her. The difference between me and her was really huge, and when i say huge, i really mean it. She was a wealthy student, having a project about homeless people. And I - I was one of those dirty, poor homeless people. But when you really love - when it's true love - you just can't stop loving "ur true love"...
HÅBER NOGEN VIL RETTE! THANKS IN ADVANCE!
Svar #1
19. november 2004 af Marcus (Slettet)
Hej star7
Kiggede den hurtigt igennem og faldt over et par småting:
Du glemmer et par steder at skrive "I" med stort.
"she was the beaufulest" skal være "she was the most beautiful"
"ur true love" (tilsidst) mener du "your true love"?
Der er måske lidt mere, men det kan jeg lige ligge på i morgen :)
Mvh
Kiggede den hurtigt igennem og faldt over et par småting:
Du glemmer et par steder at skrive "I" med stort.
"she was the beaufulest" skal være "she was the most beautiful"
"ur true love" (tilsidst) mener du "your true love"?
Der er måske lidt mere, men det kan jeg lige ligge på i morgen :)
Mvh
Svar #2
21. november 2004 af star7 (Slettet)
åhh thanksss
ja jeg mener "your true love" men er det det man siger eller siger man "the one you love" el. hvad?
på forhånd tak
ja jeg mener "your true love" men er det det man siger eller siger man "the one you love" el. hvad?
på forhånd tak
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