Hej. Er der nogen som vil rette mit abstract for fejl og komme med kommentarer? Mvh Niko

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This study (analyses) how the American (sports) are organized compared to the Danish. This study (also analyses) how the expression “The American Way of Life” (is) connected with an ice hockey club and what (it means). Finally the study investigates the strengths and (weak points) in an organization like Americas compared (with) others. Moreover the study has focus on professional sport. The study’s background knowledge derives from books and Internet, and I have used a lot of specialist (in) getting the right (information). The American sports are organized almost as in Denmark if we look at the junior levels. The big different (arises) in the senior levels, where we have the professional players. This study (analyses) the economic status, which seems to be the biggest problem in the NHL league, which is a professional ice hockey league. The Phoenix Coyotes, which is a professional ice hockey club, (identify themselves) with the expression “The American Way of Life”. The American Way of Life is an expression that refers to the “life style” of people living in the (USA) It is an example of a (behavioural) modality, developed from the 17th century until today. Finally the study also investigates the strengths and weakness in the American (sports) compared to the Danish, and (doing those studies I) found out, that the biggest problem could be discharged in the NHL league.

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Lyder faktisk som et meget interesant emne, er det engelsk og idræt du har brugt ? 

Det er et rigtig spændene emne, men det var meget svært at finde information om, så det meste er baggrundsviden jeg har brugt. Men det var samfundsfag-idræt SRO opgave i 2.g, hvor vi så skulle skrive et engelsk absract af emnet