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Lille oversættelse til rettes
23. november 2004 af
studerende19 (Slettet)
Hej...
Er der nogen der vio lse på min oversættelse ? -Det håber jeg :)
Dansk version:
De nationale arkiver, en imponerende bygning på Constitution Avenue i Washington, DC, rummer de tre pergamenter, som betrages som en national skat i Amerika: The Declaration of Independence, The Constitution og The Bill of Rights.
Det tog kun Thomas Jefferson og et par andre sytten dage at skrive udkastet til uafhængighedserklæringen, som blev godkendt af kongressen den fjerde juli, 1776. Med dette dokument erklærede de tretten amerikanske stater deres uafhængighed af moderlandet "Lad os så se, om kongen af England kan læse det", skal John Hancock have sagt, mens han underskrev dokumentet.
Engelsk Version:
The National Archives, an impressive building on Constitution Avenue in Washington, DC, contains the three parchments that are seen as the national treasure in America: The Declaration of Independence, The Constitution and The Bill of Rights.
It took Thomas Jefferson and a couple of others seventeen days to draft The Declaration of Independence, which got approved the fourth of July 1776. With this document the thirteen American states declared their independence of the motherland. “Let’s see if the King of England can read it” – is John Hancock heard to have said while he was signing the document.
Håber nogen har tid og lyst
Er der nogen der vio lse på min oversættelse ? -Det håber jeg :)
Dansk version:
De nationale arkiver, en imponerende bygning på Constitution Avenue i Washington, DC, rummer de tre pergamenter, som betrages som en national skat i Amerika: The Declaration of Independence, The Constitution og The Bill of Rights.
Det tog kun Thomas Jefferson og et par andre sytten dage at skrive udkastet til uafhængighedserklæringen, som blev godkendt af kongressen den fjerde juli, 1776. Med dette dokument erklærede de tretten amerikanske stater deres uafhængighed af moderlandet "Lad os så se, om kongen af England kan læse det", skal John Hancock have sagt, mens han underskrev dokumentet.
Engelsk Version:
The National Archives, an impressive building on Constitution Avenue in Washington, DC, contains the three parchments that are seen as the national treasure in America: The Declaration of Independence, The Constitution and The Bill of Rights.
It took Thomas Jefferson and a couple of others seventeen days to draft The Declaration of Independence, which got approved the fourth of July 1776. With this document the thirteen American states declared their independence of the motherland. “Let’s see if the King of England can read it” – is John Hancock heard to have said while he was signing the document.
Håber nogen har tid og lyst
Svar #3
23. november 2004 af Epsilon (Slettet)
Til indlægget:
Der er ikke meget at komme efter, så vidt jeg kan se. Rettelser er angivet med stort.
The National Archives, an impressive building on Constitution Avenue in Washington, DC, CONTAIN [flertal; det er arkiverne og ikke bygningen, som 'indeholder' viser tilbage til] the three parchments that are CONSIDERED A national treasure in America: The Declaration of Independence, The Constitution, [manglende komma ved opremsning] and The Bill of Rights.
It took Thomas Jefferson and a couple of others seventeen days to draft The Declaration of Independence, which WAS approved BY THE CONGRESS [det har du helt glemt i oversættelsen] ON the fourth of July 1776. With this document the thirteen American states declared their independence of the motherland. “Let’s see if the King of England can read it”, John Hancock IS [komma og omvendt ordstilling efter direkte tale] heard to have said while he was signing the document.
Ellers ser det fint ud. Jeg håber, at du kan bruge kommentarerne.
//Singularity
Der er ikke meget at komme efter, så vidt jeg kan se. Rettelser er angivet med stort.
The National Archives, an impressive building on Constitution Avenue in Washington, DC, CONTAIN [flertal; det er arkiverne og ikke bygningen, som 'indeholder' viser tilbage til] the three parchments that are CONSIDERED A national treasure in America: The Declaration of Independence, The Constitution, [manglende komma ved opremsning] and The Bill of Rights.
It took Thomas Jefferson and a couple of others seventeen days to draft The Declaration of Independence, which WAS approved BY THE CONGRESS [det har du helt glemt i oversættelsen] ON the fourth of July 1776. With this document the thirteen American states declared their independence of the motherland. “Let’s see if the King of England can read it”, John Hancock IS [komma og omvendt ordstilling efter direkte tale] heard to have said while he was signing the document.
Ellers ser det fint ud. Jeg håber, at du kan bruge kommentarerne.
//Singularity
Svar #4
23. november 2004 af Dana (Slettet)
Hejsa;O)
Det hedder: declare independence FROM something
With this document the thirteen American states declared their independence FROM the motherland...
Det hedder: declare independence FROM something
With this document the thirteen American states declared their independence FROM the motherland...
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