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rettelse haster hjælp..!
er der nogen der kunne være så venlig, og rette min beskrivelse om bulimi. og gerne tilføje noget, hvis der er behov for det... :-)
Bulimia is an eating disorders. When you have bulimia, you regularly an irresistible urge to eat vast quantities of food. Often, but not always, ends Monday after a finger in throat to vomit.
Bulimia reminds anorexia. The difference between the two diseases is that by bulimia get a fierce desire to eat resulting in eating attack, while the anorexia apparently no marks hungry or are able to completely suppress it.
Common to the two diseases is that you think highly of his weight, that one is afraid to become too thick, and to try to lose weight.
Bulimia often starts with a strict diet. It can also begin with that you have anorexia, which then develops into bulimia.
Many of bulimia is not medical and therefore not quite how many people who have the disease. But it is estimated that 2 to 3 percent of all women have bulimia. The disease is most common in adolescent girls and young women, whereas it is more rare to get the boys.
tak for hjælpen på forhånd :-)
Svar #1
09. maj 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Det hedder "være så venlig AT rette....."
Du har klart meget store problemer med engelsk, og dele af din tekst er komplet uforståelige, men her er lidt hjælp du kan lære af.
Bulimia is an eating disorder(s). When you have bulimia, you have a (regularly) continuous and irresistible urge to eat vast quantities of food. (Often, but not always) More often than not(,) it ends on a Monday (after) with a finger in the throat (to vomit).
Bulimia (reminds) is like anorexia. The difference between the two (diseases) is that (by) bulimia (get) creates a (fierce) strong desire to eat (resulting in eating attack) with an uncontrolled eating session often ensuing, while (the) people suffering from anorexia (apparently no marks hungry) either feel no hunger at all or are able to suppress (it) the desire to eat completely.
(Common) (to) What the two (diseases) complaints have in common is (in) that (you think highly of his weight) they both make you very concerned about your weight, -one way or other. (, that one is afraid to become too thick, and to try to lose weight.)
Bulimia often (starts) begins (with) after a strict diet. It (can) may also (begin with that you have) develop in a person suffering from anorexia(, which) and then (develops) take a very different course into bulimia.
(Many of bulimia is not medical and therefore not quite how many people who have the disease).
T H I S I S N O N S E N S E !!!
(But i)It is estimated, however, that (2) two to (3) three (percent) per cent of all women have bulimia. The disease is most common in adolescent girls and young women(,) whereas (it is more rare to get the) boys are less often affected.
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