Englesk rettelse

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you would like to become a Subway franchisee

In your letter you:

1. give information about yourself

2. give reasons why you would like to become a Subway franchisee

3. ask for further information

4. give your letter a suitable ending.

her er brevet:

Dear Sir or Madam

I am 18 years old. After attending Niels Brock college, where I passed examinations very well. I want to become a Subway franchisee. Marketing is my passion I have always looked for it. Many members of my family are in this business so its like my family business and I think I have natural talent for it. As I have much speaking skill, my teachers always admired my this ability.

I don’t have much investment and to become a franchisee is a very simple way and its safe. So there is no risk. A person as me is fit for it I have much planes and this is not my destination. So its very good if I start from a safe zone. It would not only give me money but experience, the experience of business world.

I have skills in Marketing & sales, Danish, German and French should I need to learn more for this job?

I am sure I am the person you are looking forward and my admit ion you would give a dramatic enhancement on your business.

I shall be pleased to attend an interview at any time.


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