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Hjælp til rettelser i oversættelse

25. august 2009 af dj_romeo (Slettet) - Niveau: A-niveau

Er her en som vil kigge min oversættelse igennem og rette for evt fejl :)

Først kommer her teksten som skal overtættes:

Først ca. 100 år senere etablerede romerske handelsfolk bopladser i det indre af England og fik indflydelse hos de keltiske stammers konger, og det blev således en ret fredelig invasion af købmænd og håndværkere, som bragte den romerske kultur og det latinske sprog til England.

Det sted i England, hvor romerne har efterladt det mest bemærkselsværdige monument, er nok i byen Bath. Her i det milde klima i Sydengland fandt de noget, som mindede dem om Rom: Kilder som hver dag sender 2,3 millioner liter 50 grader varmt vand op fra jordens indre.

Dette var et naturfænomen, som forundrede allerede de keltiske stammer, og de opdage hurtigt, at det varme vand var rigt på mineraler med helbredende egenskaber. Da romerne slog sig ned i området ca. 60 e.Kr., begyndte de straks at udnytte kilderne ved at bygge et kompliceret system af offentlige bade, som dækkede et stort område. Ved siden af byggede de et tempel indviet til den keltiske gudinde Sulis og den romerske gudinde Minerva, og de kladte byen Aquae Sulis.

Da Romerne forlod England, blev badene ikke vedligeholdt. det store drænrør (1 meter i diameter), som ledte overskudsvandet bort, blev tilstoppet, vandstanden steg, og området blev til en sump. Bygningerne styrtede sammen, og alt blev begravet under 3-4 meter dynd. Kilden blev imidlertid ved med at flyde, og i år 1100 blev der byggetet nyt bad på samme sted lge ovenpå romerne hellige vandreservoir.

Op gennem middelalderen var vandet i Bath berømt for sin helbredende virkning, og læger anbefalede det til bade- og drikkevand. Da ogs kongefamilierne begyndte at besøge stedet, blev det moderne at tage til Bath. Byen voksede og blev rig, og badene udvidedes.

Det var først i slutningen af 19. århundrede, at grundige udgravninger afslørede de imponerende romerske bade med søjler og statuer, som idag er en af Englands største turistattraktioner.

Og her er så min oversættelse:

Not until approximately 100 years later, the Roman merchants established settlements in the inner England and they achieved influence amongst the kings of the Celtic tribes, in this way it became a quite peaceful invasion by merchants and craftsmen who brought the Roman culture and the Latin language to England.


The particular place in England where the Romans have left the most remarkable monument is probably in the city of Bath. Here in the mild climate of Southern England, they found something that reminded them of Rome: springs that daily sent 2,3 millions liters of 50 degrees hot water from the core of the earth.
 

This was a natural phenomenon which already astonished the Celtic tribes, and they quickly discovered that the hot water was rich in minerals with curing qualities. When the Romans settled down in the area about 60 AD, they immediately started using the springs by building a complicated system of public baths, which covered a large area. Next to this, they built a temple dedicated to the Celtic Goddess Sulis and the Roman Goddess Minerva, and they named the city Aquae Sulis.

When the Romans left England, the baths was not maintained. The big drain-pipe (1 meter in diameter), which lead the surplus water away, was clogged up, the water rose and the area turned into a swamp. The buildings collapsed and everything was buried beneath three to four meters of silt. The spring kept floating however, and in the year 1100 a new bath was built at the same place right above the Romans sacred reservoir.

Through the Middle Ages the water in Bath was famous for its curing effect, and doctors recommended it as bathing- and drinking water. When the royal family started visiting the place too, it became fashionable to go to Bath. The city grew and became rich, and the baths increased.

It was not until the end of the 19th century, that thorough excavations revealed the impressive Roman baths with pillars and statues, which today is one of England’s greatest tourist attractions.

På forhånd tak for hjælpen :)


Brugbart svar (2)

Svar #1
26. august 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)

 Det er ikke så lidt du beder folk om !!!!!


Svar #2
26. august 2009 af dj_romeo (Slettet)

Nej er det ikke, men er det et problem??


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Svar #3
26. august 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)

 Det burde det være for dig.


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Svar #4
26. august 2009 af exatb

Jeg ville nok skrive "some 100 years.." 4 afsnit "the baths were not maintained.." , ellers synes jeg det er udmærket


Svar #5
26. august 2009 af dj_romeo (Slettet)

hmm troede folk var her for at hjælpe og ikke for at komme med ligegyldige kommentarer


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Svar #6
26. august 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)

 Ja, netop "hjælpe", -ikke gøre arbejdet for en.


Svar #7
26. august 2009 af dj_romeo (Slettet)

det har jeg da heller ikke bedt nogen om?

Jeg har oversat en tekst og spørger om her er nogle som vil kigge igennem og se om jeg har lavet nogle store fejl..


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Svar #8
26. august 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)

 Not until approximately 100 years later, did the Roman merchants establish(ed) settlements in the (inner) central parts of England and they (achieved) gained influence (amongst) with  the (kings) chiefs of the Celtic tribes,  and in this way it became quite a (quite) peaceful invasion (by) of merchants and craftsmen, who brought (the) Roman culture and the Latin language to England.,


(The particular place in England) The city of Bath is  where the Romans (have) probably left their most remarkable monument (is probably in the city of Bath). Here in the mild climate of Southern England(,) they (found) came across something that reminded them of Rome: springs that daily (sent) send 2(,).3 million(s) (liters) litres of 50 degree(s) hot water from the (core) centre of the earth.
 

This was a natural phenomenon which already astonished the Celtic tribes, and they (quickly discovered) soon realised that the hot water was rich in minerals with (curing qualities) therapeutic properties. When the Romans settled down in the area about 60 AD, they immediately (started) began (using) exploiting the springs (by building) and they built a (complicated) complex system of public baths, which covered a large area. (Next) Close to this(,) they built a temple dedicated to the Celtic Goddess Sulis and the Roman Goddess Minerva, and they named the city Aquae Sulis.

When the Romans left England, the baths (was) were  not maintained. The (big) large drain-pipe (1 meter in diameter) with a diameter of one metre, which lead the surplus water away, was clogged (up), the water level rose and the area was  turned into a swamp. The buildings collapsed and everything was buried beneath three (to) or four (meters) metres of silt. The spring kept (floating) running however, and in the year 1100 a new bath was built (at) on the same (place) site right above the (Romans) sacred reservoir of the Romans.

Throughout the Middle Ages the water in Bath was famous for its (curing effect) curative qualities, and doctors recommended it (as) for both bathing(-) and drinking (water). When even the royal family (started) began visiting the place (too), it became fashionable to go to Bath. The city grew and became rich, and the baths increased.

It was not until the end of the 19th century(,) that thorough excavations (revealed) uncovered the impressive Roman baths with pillars and statues, which (today is) are one of England’s greatest tourist attractions today.


Svar #9
26. august 2009 af dj_romeo (Slettet)

Mange tak for hjælpen :)


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